Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Answer directly with a clear past-tense sentence. The rest of your response is difficult to understand, so use short, simple sentences and give one specific detail, such as when you got the bike or how you used it. Check past-tense forms, such as “had,” “bought,” and “rode.”

Example: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a bike when I was about five, and I rode it for a few years. I usually rode it near our home.

Suggestion: State your opinion clearly, then explain the difference you mention between children using bikes for activities and people cycling on roads. Use natural phrases such as “popular among children” and “for exercise or leisure,” and add a specific reason or example. Avoid repeating the same idea.

Example: I don't think bikes are very popular for everyday transport in my country. However, many children ride them for exercise or for fun during the holidays. You don't see as many adults cycling on busy roads, partly because traffic can be heavy.

× When it's five by drive by then in the four wheel

✓ When I was five, ...

The answer refers to a time in the past, so use the past-tense form was rather than the present-tense form it's. The rest of this fragment is unclear, so it cannot be corrected reliably without knowing what you intended to say.

× In my opinion, by it not popular.

✓ In my opinion, it is not popular.

The sentence needs a verb between the subject it and the adjective phrase not popular. Add is to make a complete sentence. The word by appears to be a transcription error and is omitted.

× It's popular in the children for the practice to practice in a sport and in a holiday in the activity for children.

✓ It's popular with children as a sport or holiday activity.

Use with, not in, to say that something is popular among a group of people. The usual phrase is holiday activity, without in before holiday. This correction keeps the apparent meaning while removing unclear, repetitive wording.

× It's not popular in the road.

✓ It's not popular on the road.

Use on with road when describing something used or seen there. In the road usually means physically located within the roadway.