Part 1
Examiner
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidate
No, I didn't have any bike when I was a child.
Examiner
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidate
Yes, bikes are popular in our country and boys fast choice maximum boys fast choice are bikes.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Score: 72.0Suggestion: Your answer directly answers the question, but use “a bike” rather than “any bike” in this negative sentence. To make your response more developed, add a brief, specific reason or detail.
Example: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family lived in a busy city, so my parents thought it was safer for me to walk.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Score: 25.0Suggestion: The opening gives a clear answer, but the rest of the sentence is difficult to understand. Use a natural phrase such as “a popular choice,” and support your answer with a specific reason or example. Avoid repeating unclear words.
Example: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people. They’re an affordable and convenient way to get around, particularly in smaller cities.
× Yes, bikes are popular in our country and boys fast choice maximum boys fast choice are bikes.
✓ Yes, bikes are popular in our country, and most boys prefer them.
The phrase 'boys fast choice maximum boys fast choice are bikes' does not form a clear or grammatical clause. Use a complete subject and verb, such as 'most boys prefer them.' This also avoids repeating the unclear phrase.