Part 1
Examiner
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidate
No, I did not have a bite when I was in charge because I don't like barrel, also I don't know how to write a bite.
Examiner
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidate
No, I do not think bicycles are popular in my country because most of the people is riding a car or taking a proper trans walk.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Score: 25.0Suggestion: 回答方向是明确的,但多个词可能因发音或选词错误而影响理解,例如“bite”应为“bike”,“in charge”应为“a child”,“write”应为“ride”。“barrel”在这里意思不清。建议先直接回答,再用一两个具体原因补充;注意使用正确的过去时,并用“because”连接原因。
Example: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I wasn’t very interested in cycling, and I didn’t know how to ride one.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Score: 40.0Suggestion: 回答直接,但原因中的表达不够自然。“most of the people is”应改为“most people are”;英语通常说“drive a car”,而不是“ride a car”。“proper trans walk”意思不清晰;如果想表达公共交通,可以说“use public transport”。建议用清楚、具体的对比解释骑自行车不普遍的原因。
Example: No, I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. Most people prefer to drive or use public transport, especially when they need to travel long distances.
× No, I did not have a bite when I was in charge because I don't like barrel, also I don't know how to write a bite.
✓ No, I did not have a bite when I was in charge because I don't like barrel, and I also don't know how to write a bite.
逗号后面的“also I don't know...”是一个独立分句,不能仅用逗号与前面的分句连接。可以使用并列连词“and”连接,并将“also”放在主语“I”之后。
× No, I do not think bicycles are popular in my country because most of the people is riding a car or taking a proper trans walk.
✓ No, I do not think bicycles are popular in my country because most of the people are riding a car or taking a proper trans walk.
“people”是复数名词,因此后面的助动词应使用复数形式“are”,而不是单数形式“is”。修改后,“are”也与后面的并列动词“taking”保持一致。