Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Bạn trả lời trực tiếp rằng mình có xe đạp, nhưng phần sau chưa rõ nghĩa. Hãy dùng đúng từ “bike” thay vì “bite”, kiểm tra cụm “a gift for my brother” và giải thích rõ xe đạp là của bạn hay của anh/em trai. Có thể thêm một chi tiết cụ thể về màu sắc hoặc nơi bạn thường đạp xe; tránh dùng “at that time” nếu không cần thiết.

Example: Yes, I did. When I was about six, I had a really cool bike that my mother gave me as a birthday present. It was blue, and I used to ride it around our neighborhood.

Suggestion: Bạn đã nêu rõ quan điểm, nhưng câu trả lời bị lặp ý và có nhiều lỗi khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Dùng “bikes” thay vì “buys”, “my country” thay vì “my countries”, và diễn đạt lý do bằng một câu hoàn chỉnh. Hãy tránh lặp “every day” và “work”, đồng thời thêm một ví dụ cụ thể như việc người dân dùng xe đạp để đi làm hoặc đi học.

Example: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in smaller towns. Many people ride them to work or school because they are affordable and convenient. They are also a good way to get some exercise.

× When I was sick I had a very cool bite that my mother had bought as a gift on my brother at that time.

✓ When I was sick, I had a very cool bite that my mother had bought as a gift for my brother at that time.

Use for to show who the gift was intended for. On is not the correct preposition in this context.

× People in my countries you buy to go to work and also the study it is very useful.

✓ People in my country buy bikes to go to work and study; they are very useful.

The sentence shifts from the subject people to the pronoun you, then to it. Keep the subject consistent and use they to refer to the plural noun bikes.

× People in my countries you buy to go to work and also the study it is very useful.

✓ People in my country buy bikes to go to work and study; they are very useful.

The definite article the is not needed before study here. Study is part of the parallel phrase to go to work and study.

× People in my countries you buy to go to work and also the study it is very useful.

✓ People in my country buy bikes to go to work and study; they are very useful.

The original combines several clauses without a clear grammatical structure. Use people as the subject of buy, connect work and study in a parallel structure, and use a separate clause to explain that the bikes are useful.