Part 1
Examiner
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidate
Yes I did, I have a small bike when I was about 8.
Examiner
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidate
Yeah, my country almost people ride bike.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: 回答直接,但时态不一致:讲童年经历应使用过去时,将“have”改为“had”。可以补充一个具体细节,例如骑车的地点或用途,并用连接词自然展开。
Example: Yes, I did. I had a small bike when I was about eight, and I often rode it around my neighborhood after school.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Score: 35.0Suggestion: 表达的意思可以理解,但“my country almost people”语序错误,而且“ride bike”需要冠词或复数形式。直接回答后,可以说明哪些人常骑车以及原因,让观点更具体。
Example: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them, especially in busy cities, because cycling is an affordable way to get around.
× Yes I did, I have a small bike when I was about 8.
✓ Yes, I did. I had a small bike when I was about 8.
句子描述的是小时候的经历,且有过去时间状语“when I was about 8”,所以动词“have”应使用过去式“had”。
× Yeah, my country almost people ride bike.
✓ Yeah, almost all people in my country ride bikes.
“almost”不能直接放在“people”前表达“几乎所有人”。应使用“almost all people”,表示“几乎所有人”。
× Yeah, my country almost people ride bike.
✓ Yeah, almost all people in my country ride bikes.
这里泛指人们骑自行车,应将可数名词“bike”改为复数“bikes”。