Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 先直接回答问题：用“Yes, I did”而不是“Yes, I have”。注意你说的是“bike”，不要误说成“bag”；过去发生的事情要使用过去时，例如“my parents bought me a bike”。删去重复和填充词，并补充一个简短、具体的感受或原因。

Example: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a bike when I was a child, and I was really happy when they gave it to me.

Suggestion: 先明确表达观点，再用城市对比支持观点。注意主谓一致，应说“it depends”；描述普及程度时可用“popular”或“widely used”，不要说“the back”。城市前不加“the”，并将沈阳的位置说清楚，例如“Shenyang, in northeastern China”。使用“whereas”连接对比，避免重复转折词。

Example: Yes, I think bikes are fairly popular, although it depends on the city. For example, they are common in Shenyang, in northeastern China, whereas fewer people seem to use them in Dalian.

× I have a bag when I was a child.

✓ I had a bag when I was a child.

句子描述的是童年时的过去情况，因此谓语动词要用过去式。have 的过去式是 had。

× The IT is my parents bought to me.

✓ My parents bought it for me.

原句把“It is”和“My parents bought...”两个结构混在一起，导致句子结构不完整。应直接用“My parents bought it...”表达“父母给我买了它”。

× My parents bought it to me.

✓ My parents bought it for me.

表示“为某人买某物”时，通常用“buy something for someone”，而不是“buy something to someone”。

× I'm very happy.

✓ I was very happy.

这里描述的是童年时的感受，时间在过去，因此应将现在时 am 改为过去式 was。

× But it depend.

✓ But it depends.

一般现在时中，主语 it 是第三人称单数，动词 depend 需要加 -s，变为 depends。

× In the Shenyang...

✓ In Shenyang...

城市名称前通常不加定冠词 the，所以应说“In Shenyang”，而不是“In the Shenyang”。

× In northern East China city...

✓ In a city in northern East China...

city 是单数可数名词，泛指某一座城市时需要加不定冠词 a。也可以调整语序，让地点表达更清楚。