Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 先直接回答“没有”，再用一两句说明原因。注意使用过去时：描述童年时，应该说“my family was very poor”和“we couldn’t afford”。“even to eat a lot of dishes”和“get a bar”表达不清楚，建议删除或换成准确说法。避免重复“I”，并控制在三句话以内。

Example: No, I didn’t have a bike as a child. My family was quite poor at the time, so we couldn’t afford one. I usually walked wherever I needed to go.

Suggestion: 回答方向正确，但后半句不完整，也有重复和停顿。可以先明确表示自行车很受欢迎，再补充具体情况，例如电动自行车很常见，以及人们使用它们的原因。注意说“electric bikes”，不用“electrical bike”。

Example: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially electric bikes. They’re convenient for getting around crowded cities, and they’re cheaper to run than cars.

× I didn't have a bike when I was a child because at that time my family is very poor.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child because at that time my family was very poor.

句子描述的是童年时的情况，属于过去时间，因此应将现在时“is”改为过去时“was”。

× We cannot afford a bike, even, uh, to eat a lot of dishes.

✓ We couldn't afford a bike, even, uh, to eat a lot of dishes.

这里是在说明当时家里经济困难，应使用过去时。将“cannot”改为“couldn't”以与过去的时间背景保持一致。

× It's uh, it was a very big problem for us, for my family.

✓ It was a very big problem for us, for my family.

句子描述过去的问题，应使用过去时“was”。原句中的“It's”是现在时，而且与后面的“it was”重复；删去“It's”即可。

× Yes, I think so, because uh, now a lot of bikes, not only bikes, uh, more are electrical bike.

✓ Yes, I think so, because there are a lot of bikes now, and more of them are electric bikes.

表达“现在有很多自行车”时，需要使用“There are + 复数名词”，不能直接说“now a lot of bikes”。