Part 1
Examiner
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidate
Yes, when I was a child I have a bike like blue one.
Examiner
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidate
Yes, in my opinion bike like motorbike or electricity bike is popular in my country. We can see a lot of people drive that on the street.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: 回答直接,但要注意时态:谈童年经历应使用过去时“had”,而不是“have”。“like blue one”表达不自然,可以说“a blue one”或“a blue bike”。建议补充一个具体细节,例如你常在哪里骑车或是否喜欢那辆车。
Example: Yes, I had a blue bike when I was a child. I used to ride it around my neighborhood after school, and it was one of my favorite toys.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Score: 58.0Suggestion: 你明确表达了观点,也提供了街上常见摩托车和电动车的例子。注意名词单复数和搭配:可以说“motorbikes and electric bikes”,而不是“electricity bike”;骑自行车或摩托车通常用“ride”,不用“drive that”。建议补充一个具体原因,例如它们方便通勤或能避开拥堵。
Example: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially motorbikes and electric bikes. You can see them everywhere because they’re a convenient way to get around, particularly in busy cities.
× Yes, when I was a child I have a bike like blue one.
✓ Yes, when I was a child, I had a bike like a blue one.
句子描述的是“小时候”的经历,时间发生在过去,因此应将 have 改为过去式 had。
× Yes, when I was a child I have a bike like blue one.
✓ Yes, when I was a child, I had a bike like a blue one.
blue one 中的 one 指代一辆自行车,是单数可数名词,因此前面需要加不定冠词 a。
× Yes, in my opinion bike like motorbike or electricity bike is popular in my country.
✓ Yes, in my opinion, bikes like motorbikes or electric bikes are popular in my country.
这里泛指自行车这一类事物,应使用复数 bikes;举例时也应使用复数 motorbikes 和 electric bikes。
× Yes, in my opinion bike like motorbike or electricity bike is popular in my country.
✓ Yes, in my opinion, bikes like motorbikes or electric bikes are popular in my country.
electricity 是名词,不能直接用来修饰 bike。表示“电动的”应使用形容词 electric,因此应说 electric bikes。
× Yes, in my opinion bike like motorbike or electricity bike is popular in my country.
✓ Yes, in my opinion, bikes like motorbikes or electric bikes are popular in my country.
句子的主语是复数 bikes,因此谓语动词也要用复数形式 are,不能用 is。
× We can see a lot of people drive that on the street.
✓ We can see a lot of people riding them on the street.
that 是单数指示代词,而前文谈论的是复数的自行车,应使用 them。这里用 them 指代自行车;同时,ride bikes 比 drive bikes 更符合通常表达。