Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 先直接回答“有”，并统一使用过去时描述童年经历。注意“bike”不要误说成“back”；“I was really like it”应改为“I really liked it”。删掉不完整的“The bike is”，再补充一个具体细节，例如车的颜色或你骑车时的感受。

Example: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father gave it to me as a birthday present, and I really liked it. It was bright red, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood.

Suggestion: 回答一般情况时用复数“bikes”，并把“share shared bike”改为“shared bikes”。避免把句子拆成不完整的“In my city.”；“the mobile people”和“ride a bag”表达不准确，可改为“many people”和“ride a bike”。用一个连接词引出具体例子，并说明共享单车为何受欢迎。

Example: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in large cities. There are many shared bikes available, so people can easily rent one using a mobile app. For example, many commuters ride them to work because they are convenient and inexpensive.

× Yes, of course I have a wonderful back When I was a child, the back is.

✓ Yes, of course, I had a wonderful bike when I was a child.

这里描述的是小时候的情况，应使用一般过去时。将 have 改为 had。根据上下文，back 应是 bike；另外，原句中的 “the back is” 结构不完整，因此将意思整理为完整句子。

× So my father sent it to me as a birthday gift and I was really like it.

✓ So my father sent it to me as a birthday gift, and I really liked it.

句子讲述过去发生的事情，应使用一般过去时。“like” 的过去式是 “liked”。“I was really like it” 中多余的 was 应删除，因为 like 在这里是实义动词，不需要 be 动词。

× Yes, I think bike is popular in my country because there are many share shared bike.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because there are many shared bikes.

这里泛指自行车这一类事物，应使用复数 bikes，并相应使用 are。“many” 后面必须接可数名词复数，所以应说 “many shared bikes”。

× In my city.

✓ There are many shared bikes in my city.

“In my city” 只是地点短语，缺少主语和谓语，不能独立构成完整句子。可以将它与前一句合并，或补充完整的主语和谓语。