Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 先直接回答问题，再用一两个具体细节解释原因或补充经历。注意时态和表达：过去的愿望用“wanted”；“家里经济条件不太好”可说“my family wasn't well-off”；“父亲总是告诉我要节省”可说“my father always told me to be careful with money”。最后的“because”没有接完整原因，应删掉或补全。建议控制在3句以内，避免意思重复。

Example: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child, although I really wanted one. My family wasn’t well-off, so my father encouraged me to be careful with money. I eventually learned to ride a bike when I was older.

Suggestion: 观点明确，也给出了原因，但“popular”对应复数“bikes”，应使用“they are”。避免重复说“骑自行车便宜、容易”，可以合并成一个更自然的表达。用“for example”或“because”引出具体细节，例如街上常见自行车或骑车通勤的人。注意表达简洁，最多补充一两个支持细节。

Example: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. You can see them all over the streets, especially in busy city centres. They’re an affordable and convenient way to get around, particularly for short trips.

× When I was a child, I didn't have a bike, even though I really want that one.

✓ When I was a child, I didn't have a bike, even though I really wanted one.

这句话描述的是过去的经历，因此 want 应使用过去式 wanted。这里泛指想要一辆自行车，用 one 比 that one 更自然。

× So my father always tell me economize

✓ So my father always told me to economize

上下文讲的是童年时的情况，因此 tell 应使用过去式 told。另外，tell someone 后面通常接 to do sth.，所以应说 told me to economize。

× So my father always tell me economize and now I know how to ride a bike because.

✓ So my father always told me to economize, and now I know how to ride a bike.

because 是从属连词，后面需要接完整的原因从句，不能单独放在句末。此处删去 because 即可使句子完整。此外，tell someone 后应接 to do sth.，即 told me to economize。

× I think it's very popular in my country because now when you go to the street you can see the bikes everywhere and it's cheap to ride a bike and it's easy to ride a bike.

✓ I think they are very popular in my country because now, when you go out on the street, you can see bikes everywhere, and it's cheap and easy to ride a bike.

这里的 they 指代复数名词 bikes，不能用单数代词 it。相应地，谓语也应使用 are。