Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 先直接回答问题：这里应说“Yes, I did”，因为问题使用助动词 did。用“delighted”或“happy”替代“flattered”（flattered通常指受到赞美或重视）；“as my ten years old present”可改为“for my tenth birthday”。避免重复使用“beautiful”，并补充一个具体细节，例如自行车的颜色或你如何使用它。

Example: Yes, I did. My mother gave me a pink bicycle for my tenth birthday, and I was delighted. I rode it around our neighbourhood with my friends.

Suggestion: 回答切题，但要先明确说明共享单车为什么受欢迎。“sheer bikes”应为“shared bikes”，“anyone who needed”可改为“anyone who needs one”，“use it”应与复数 bikes 保持一致。删去重复的“you know”，并用“because”或“for example”连接原因和具体用途；可说明人们用共享单车完成从地铁站或公交站到目的地的短途出行。

Example: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially shared bikes. People can easily unlock one using a mobile app, so they’re convenient for short trips. For example, commuters often ride them between a subway station and their workplace.

× Yes, I had.

✓ Yes, I did.

回答以“Did you have...?”开头的一般疑问句时，简短肯定回答应使用助动词“did”，而不是重复使用实义动词“had”。可以套用结构“Yes, I did.”。

× little girls just want some beautiful pink bicycle

✓ little girls just want a beautiful pink bicycle

“bicycle”是单数可数名词，不能直接用“some”修饰。这里应使用不定冠词“a”。也可以说“some beautiful pink bicycles”，但名词需要改为复数。

× I'm very flattered that I had one from my mother as my ten years old present.

✓ I'm very flattered that I had one from my mother as my tenth birthday present.

“ten years old”通常用于描述人的年龄，不能这样直接修饰“present”。表达“十岁生日礼物”时，可以用“tenth birthday present”。

× anyone who needed can use it immediately

✓ anyone who needs a bike can use one immediately

这里描述的是共享单车的一般使用方式，应使用一般现在时。“needed”是过去式，应改为“needs”。“anyone”作主语时，定语从句中的动词也要用第三人称单数形式。

× we often use it as you know some short distance from the underground station or bus station

✓ we often use them for short trips from an underground station or a bus station

表示“用于短途出行”时，应使用“for short trips”，而不是“as some short distance”。可以记住搭配“use something for...”，表示“把某物用于……”。

× we often use it as you know some short distance from the underground station or bus station

✓ we often use them for short trips from an underground station or a bus station

前文提到的是复数的共享单车，因此这里应用复数代词“them”，而不是单数“it”。代词的单复数应与它所指代的名词保持一致。