Part 1
Examiner
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidate
Yeah, I had a bike and I used to practice the bike for several months and then I like to ride it very much.
Examiner
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidate
Yeah, absolutely. There are many people riding a bike to their job, to their job and I usually ride a bike to my school because I think Katy is healthy.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Score: 58.0Suggestion: 回答切题,也补充了练习和喜欢骑车的信息。注意过去时态要保持一致:把“then I like”改为“then I liked”;“practice the bike”不自然,可说“practise riding it”。还可以用一个具体细节说明你如何练习或为什么喜欢骑车,避免重复表达。
Example: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about seven, and I practised riding it in the park for a few months. After that, I really enjoyed cycling around my neighbourhood.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Score: 45.0Suggestion: 你直接表达了观点,也提供了个人例子,但“to their job”重复,影响流畅度;“ride a bike to their job”可改为“cycle to work”。最后的“Katy”应确认是否想说“cycling”,并注意完整表达理由,例如“cycling is a healthy way to exercise”。可以补充一种常见使用场景,让回答更具体。
Example: Yes, definitely. Bikes are quite popular in my country because they’re an affordable and convenient way to get around. Many people cycle to work, and I often ride my bike to school because it’s good exercise and helps me avoid traffic.
× Yeah, I had a bike and I used to practice the bike for several months and then I like to ride it very much.
✓ Yeah, I had a bike and I used to practice the bike for several months, and then I liked to ride it very much.
这段话描述的是童年时的经历,前面的 “had” 和 “used to practice” 都表示过去,因此后面的 “like” 也应使用过去式 “liked”,以保持时态一致。讲述过去发生的事情时,注意让句中的相关动词都与过去时间相匹配。