Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Answer the question directly by saying whether you had a bike. Use the past tense (“had” or “bought”), and make sure the details clearly relate to riding a bike. Your final thought is incomplete, so finish with a complete sentence.

Example: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father bought it for me, and I used it to ride to school and visit friends. I really enjoyed cycling around my neighborhood.

Suggestion: State your opinion clearly and use “bikes” rather than “BY.” Explain why they are popular with a natural phrase such as “they are convenient and easy to ride.” Add one specific supporting detail, such as their use for commuting or short trips.

Example: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because they are convenient and easy to ride. Many people use them for short trips or to get to work. They are also a good way to avoid traffic.

× I have a bag when I watch I and my father buy it for me to eat, help me go to school, hang out with friends and.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child, and my father bought it for me to help me go to school and hang out with friends.

The question asks about your childhood, so use past-tense verbs: had, was, and bought. The phrase when I watch I does not form a clear grammatical clause; when I was a child fits the question. I have also removed the unfinished final and and made the purpose phrase grammatical. Use a bike rather than a bag to match the question.

× I think BY is very popular in my country because it's very convenient to you and all people to try it very easy.

✓ I think bikes are very popular in my country because they are very convenient for people and very easy to ride.

Use convenient for when describing something that benefits or suits people; convenient to is not the natural preposition here. The corrected sentence also uses they to refer to the plural noun bikes.

× I think BY is very popular in my country because it's very convenient to you and all people to try it very easy.

✓ I think bikes are very popular in my country because they are very convenient for people and very easy to ride.

Easy is an adjective, so it should describe the bike or the act of riding it in the structure it is easy to ride. The original phrase try it very easy does not use easy in a grammatical construction. Use very easy to ride to express that riding a bike is easy.