Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Answer directly using the past tense: say whether you had a bike as a child. Explain your reason in a clear, natural sentence. Avoid unclear phrases such as “asking her to bike” and “No saddle”; if you mean that you disliked sitting on a bike, say so directly.

Example: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because I wasn’t interested in cycling. I preferred travelling by car, and I found bike seats uncomfortable.

Suggestion: Your answer gives a relevant reason and example, but it is repetitive and unfinished. Avoid repeating “in my country” and “purposes,” use “people” rather than “peoples,” and complete the contrast about what younger people prefer. Organize your answer with a direct opinion, one specific example, and a linking phrase such as “while.”

Example: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Many families use practical motorcycles, such as the Splendor, for commuting and running errands. Younger people often prefer sportier models, while families tend to choose reliable bikes that are economical to use.

× I really don't have a bike when I am child

✓ I really didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about the past, so use the past forms didn't have and was. Use a before the singular countable noun child.

× because I don't like to ride a bike asking her to bike

✓ because I didn't like riding a bike.

After like, both the infinitive and the -ing form are possible, but riding is a natural choice here. The phrase asking her to bike does not fit grammatically or clearly with the rest of the sentence, so omit it.

× I like to drive a car.

✓ I liked driving a car.

The answer refers to the student's childhood, so liked is more consistent with the past-time context. Driving is a natural -ing form after liked.

× No saddle.

✓ There was no saddle.

No saddle is a fragment because it has no verb. Add there was to make it a complete sentence. Use this correction only if the student means that the bike had no saddle.

× Most of the peoples prefer Seplander

✓ Most people prefer Seplander.

People is already the plural form of person in this context. Peoples usually refers to distinct ethnic or national groups, so it is not appropriate here.

× which is for family use and other purposes of like household purposes

✓ which is for family use and other purposes, such as household tasks

The phrase purposes of like is not grammatically appropriate here. Use such as to introduce examples, and avoid repeating purposes.

× for young peoples

✓ for young people

People is the correct plural noun for referring to young individuals. Peoples generally means separate populations or ethnic groups.

× and after that for young peoples and other

✓ There are also bikes for young people and others.

The original phrase is incomplete and does not form a sentence. Add a subject and verb, and complete the final reference with others.