Part 1
Examiner
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidate
Yeah, I do have.
Examiner
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidate
Yeah, that's what's popular. This year, many people writing that.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Score: 35.0Suggestion: 回答过去经历时要使用过去时。你的回答表达不够清楚,且“do have”与问题中的过去时间不一致。先直接回答是否有自行车,再补充一个具体细节,例如自行车的颜色、用途或骑车的地点。
Example: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was a child, and I often rode it around my neighbourhood.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Score: 30.0Suggestion: 先明确回答自行车是否受欢迎。“That’s what’s popular”表达不自然;“many people writing that”缺少助动词,而且意思不清楚。可以说明人们骑车的原因,并给出具体场景。补充信息时注意使用完整句子和合适的连接词。
Example: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people use them to commute because they are affordable and convenient, especially in busy cities.
× Yeah, I do have.
✓ Yeah, I did.
问题询问的是你小时候是否有自行车,使用一般过去时。原句中的“do”是一般现在时助动词,应改为过去式“did”。回答中可以用“did”代替“did have”,避免重复动词。
× This year, many people writing that.
✓ This year, many people are writing that.
原句缺少现在进行时所需的助动词“are”。主语“many people”后应使用“are”,构成“are writing”。