Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Answer directly, then add one relevant detail. Avoid repeating the same idea and use the past tense for childhood memories. Say “bought it for me” or “bought me one,” not both “that” and “it”; use “for my birthday.” To describe its condition now, say that it “no longer works” or “is too old to ride.”

Example: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me for my birthday, and I rode it around our neighbourhood. I don’t use it anymore because it’s very old and no longer works.

Suggestion: State your opinion once and avoid repeating “because everyone.” Use the plural “bikes” with “are,” and say “most households have one” rather than “everyone usually have it one.” Clarify your final point: if you mean that roads or cycling facilities make cycling easier, name them directly and explain how they help.

Example: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many households have at least one, and people use them for short trips or to get to work. In some areas, bike lanes and other cycling facilities make it safer and more convenient to ride.

× When I was young, I had one bike that my mother and father bought it for me in my birthday.

✓ When I was young, I had one bike that my mother and father bought for me on my birthday.

The relative pronoun that already refers to the bike, so it is redundant to add it after bought. Remove it to avoid repeating the object.

× When I was young, I had one bike that my mother and father bought it for me in my birthday.

✓ When I was young, I had one bike that my mother and father bought for me on my birthday.

Use on with a specific day or occasion, such as on my birthday. In is not the correct preposition here.

× But right now it's already.

✓ But now it is already very old.

This sentence is incomplete because already does not explain what is true about the bike. Complete the thought by adding a description, such as very old.

× It's already cannot use because it's. It is very old.

✓ It can no longer be used because it is very old.

The bike is the thing being used, so the passive form be used is needed. Say it can no longer be used, not it's cannot use. The contraction it's means it is and cannot be placed before cannot.

× For me I think in my country bike are very popular.

✓ I think bikes are very popular in my country.

Bike is being used to refer to bicycles in general, so it should be plural: bikes. Use the plural form when making a general statement about a category of things.

× Everyone usually have it one in each house.

✓ Everyone usually has one in each house.

Everyone is grammatically singular, so it takes the singular verb has, not have. Check the subject before choosing the verb form.

× Everyone usually have it one in each house.

✓ Everyone usually has one in each house.

It is redundant and makes the phrase it one ungrammatical. Use one by itself to refer back to a bike.

× Also it's happening facilities that help my sickle to be more easy.

✓ Also, there are facilities that make cycling easier.

Use there are to introduce the plural noun facilities. The construction it's happening does not correctly introduce the existence of facilities.

× Also it's happening facilities that help my sickle to be more easy.

✓ Also, there are facilities that make cycling easier.

The comparative form of easy is easier. Use easier rather than more easy in this sentence.