Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 先直接回答是否有自行车，并注意使用过去时：小时候拥有自行车应说“I had a bike”，而不是“I have a bag”。“bag”可能是“bike”的口误；“surrounded my neighbours”不符合语境，可改为“ride around my neighbourhood”。避免重复“I use it”，并补充一个具体细节，例如自行车的颜色或和朋友骑车做什么。

Example: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought me a pink one when I was five. I used to ride it around my neighbourhood and go to the playground with my friends.

Suggestion: 观点明确，也给出了经济原因，但句子过长，连接词堆叠，影响表达清晰度。可先说明自行车很受欢迎，再解释许多人买不起汽车或摩托车，因此选择自行车。注意语法：说“the average income is low”或“GDP per capita is low”；“not everyone has”；“bikes are cheaper”，不要说“more cheaper”。

Example: Yes, bikes are quite popular in Myanmar. Since the average income is relatively low, many people can’t afford a car or a motorbike. As a result, they choose bikes because they are more affordable.

× Yes, I have a bag since I was five years old.

✓ Yes, I have had a bag since I was five years old.

“since I was five years old”表示从过去某个时间持续到现在，应使用现在完成时“have had”，而不是一般现在时“have”。

× I use it to surrounded my neighbours.

✓ I use it to surround my neighbours.

“to”表示目的时，后面应接动词原形，因此应将“surrounded”改为“surround”。建议记住“use something to do something”的结构。

× I use it to Um Go to playground together to play with my friends.

✓ I use it to go to the playground together with my friends to play.

“playground”是单数可数名词，前面需要冠词。此处可说“the playground”。“Um”是口语填充词，不需要写入句子。

× Not everyone have like cars, motorbikes.

✓ Not everyone has cars or motorbikes.

“everyone”虽然指很多人，但语法上是单数，因此一般现在时的谓语动词应使用“has”，而不是“have”。列举两种交通工具时，可以用“or”连接。

× Most of them would like to use bike.

✓ Most of them would like to use bikes.

这里泛指自行车这一类交通工具，应使用复数“bikes”。表达泛指时，通常可用可数名词复数形式。

× It is more cheaper.

✓ They are cheaper.

“cheaper”已经是“cheap”的比较级，不能再加“more”。前文泛指复数的自行车，因此代词和谓语也应改为“They are”。