Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答直接，但时态不一致：谈过去的童年经历，应将“do have”改为“had”。可以补充一个具体细节，例如自行车的颜色、你常骑车去哪里，或你是否喜欢骑车。

Example: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was red, and I often rode it around my neighbourhood after school.

Suggestion: 先清楚、直接地回答自行车是否受欢迎；注意“barks”应为“bikes”。语法上应说“go to work”（不加the）和“they cycle”，不要说“usually to go”或“they cycling”。另外，说明人们骑车的具体原因或场景，并用“also”或“for example”等连接信息。

Example: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them to work because they are convenient and inexpensive. In their spare time, they also cycle in parks for exercise.

× Yes, I do have a bike when I was a child

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

句子中的“when I was a child”说明这是过去的经历，因此主句也应使用过去时。这里应将“do have”改为“had”。

× Yes, barks are popular in our country. People usually to go to the work, in their spare time, they cycling in the park or go outside.

✓ Yes, barks are popular in our country. People usually go to work. In their spare time, they cycle in the park or go outside.

“usually”表示习惯性行为，后面的动词应使用一般现在时。“usually”后直接接动词原形“go”，不需要“to”；描述“他们骑车”时应使用一般现在时“cycle”，不能单独使用“cycling”。

× Yes, barks are popular in our country. People usually to go to the work, in their spare time, they cycling in the park or go outside.

✓ Yes, barks are popular in our country. People usually go to work. In their spare time, they cycle in the park or go outside.

表示去上班时，固定表达是“go to work”，其中“work”前通常不加定冠词“the”。

× Yes, barks are popular in our country. People usually to go to the work, in their spare time, they cycling in the park or go outside.

✓ Yes, barks are popular in our country. People usually go to work. In their spare time, they cycle in the park or go outside.

原句用逗号连接了两个可以独立成句的部分，造成逗号拼接错误。应使用句号分开，并将“In their spare time”作为新句的开头。