Part 1
Examiner
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidate
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Examiner
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidate
Yes, definitely bikes in China is very popular, especially for some people like do some exercise and many people use aid for short commutes, especially in cities with bike, sharing programs. It's very popular.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Score: 10.0Suggestion: 你重复了考官的问题,没有直接回答。先用“Yes”或“No”表明答案,再补充一两句具体细节,例如自行车的颜色、用途,或你小时候骑车的经历。
Example: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was about seven, and I used to ride it around my neighbourhood with my friends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Score: 52.0Suggestion: 回答切题,也提到了锻炼、短途通勤和共享单车,但有一些语法和表达问题。注意“bikes”是复数,应该搭配“are”;“some people like do some exercise”可改为“some people use them to exercise”;“use aid for short commutes”表达不自然,可直接说“use them for short commutes”。此外,结尾重复了“very popular”,可以删去,并用连接词组织原因。
Example: Yes, definitely. Bikes are quite popular in China because people use them both for exercise and for short commutes. In many cities, bike-sharing programs make cycling especially convenient.
× bikes in China is very popular
✓ Bikes in China are very popular
主语“bikes”是复数,因此谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”,不能用单数形式“is”。
× people like do some exercise
✓ people who like doing some exercise
“like”后面接另一个动词时,通常使用动名词形式(动词-ing),所以“do”应改为“doing”。也可以说“people who like to do some exercise”。
× many people use aid for short commutes
✓ many people use them for short commutes
这里需要用代词指代前文的复数名词“bikes”,应使用宾格代词“them”。“aid”不能在此处代替自行车。