Part 1
Examiner
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidate
Yes, I have more than one bike when I was a child.
Examiner
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidate
Bike is very popular in my country because it's a convenient way you can go anywhere by bike literally.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: 回答直接,但时态有误:描述童年经历应将“have”改为“had”。“more than one bike”语法正确,但可以补充一个具体细节,例如你通常骑车做什么,让回答更自然、完整。
Example: Yes, I had more than one bike when I was a child. I used to ride them around my neighborhood with my friends after school.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Score: 58.0Suggestion: 先直接回答,并注意泛指时通常用复数“Bikes”。“a convenient way you can go anywhere by bike”表达不自然,而且“literally”在这里显得多余。可以具体说明骑车方便在哪里,并用连接词补充原因或例子。
Example: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in smaller cities. They’re an affordable and convenient way to get around, particularly for short trips to work or the shops.
× Yes, I have more than one bike when I was a child.
✓ Yes, I had more than one bike when I was a child.
句子描述的是童年时期的情况,属于过去时间,因此动词 have 应使用过去式 had。回答过去发生或存在的事情时,要注意使用一般过去时。
× Bike is very popular in my country because it's a convenient way you can go anywhere by bike literally.
✓ Bikes are very popular in my country because they’re a convenient way to get around.
这里是在泛指自行车这一类事物,应使用复数形式 Bikes,并将谓语动词 is 改为 are,后面的代词 it 也应改为 they。泛指一类可数名词时,通常可以使用复数形式。