Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Answer directly using the past tense: say whether you owned a bike or not. The phrases “olden days” and “in an early stage while seeing” are unnatural and make your meaning unclear. Add one specific detail, such as why you wanted a bike or how you got around. Avoid repetition and keep the answer to two or three clear sentences.

Example: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child, although I really wanted one. I used to admire the bikes other children rode around our neighborhood.

Suggestion: Give a clear opinion first, then explain why bikes are popular with a specific example. Use “bikes” or “bicycles” consistently, and avoid repeated words such as “available for available.” The final sentence is incomplete; finish your idea by explaining what makes bikes convenient, such as their low cost or usefulness for short trips.

Example: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially for short trips. They’re affordable and easy to use, and they help people avoid traffic in busy areas.

× No, I don't have a bike in my childhood, but usually I I like to have a a bike in my olden days when I was young because everyone will dream about about the bike they want to ride in a early stage while seeing.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike in my childhood, but I usually wanted to have one when I was young because everyone dreams about the bike they want to ride at an early age.

The question asks about the past, so use the past tense didn't have and wanted when describing your childhood. The phrase when I was young also makes the past time frame clear.

× No, I don't have a bike in my childhood, but usually I I like to have a a bike in my olden days when I was young because everyone will dream about about the bike they want to ride in a early stage while seeing.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike in my childhood, but I usually wanted to have one when I was young because everyone dreams about the bike they want to ride at an early age.

Everyone describes people in general, so use the simple present dreams rather than will dream. The simple present is appropriate for a general statement about what people commonly do.

× No, I don't have a bike in my childhood, but usually I I like to have a a bike in my olden days when I was young because everyone will dream about about the bike they want to ride in a early stage while seeing.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike in my childhood, but I usually wanted to have one when I was young because everyone dreams about the bike they want to ride at an early age.

The natural expression is at an early age, not in a early stage. Use at with age in this expression.

× No, I don't have a bike in my childhood, but usually I I like to have a a bike in my olden days when I was young because everyone will dream about about the bike they want to ride in a early stage while seeing.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike in my childhood, but I usually wanted to have one when I was young because everyone dreams about the bike they want to ride at an early age.

Use an before early because early begins with a vowel sound. The phrase is an early age.

× Yes, of course, because, uh, transportation is the main thing which we can go wherever we want.

✓ Yes, of course. Transportation is the main way we can get wherever we want.

The original relative clause does not connect grammatically to the word thing: people do not go using a thing which we can go. Rephrase it as the main way we can get somewhere to make the relationship clear.

× If bike is available for available in our house, everyone will go uh, by using that bike.

✓ If a bike is available in our house, everyone will go by using that bike.

Bike is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article. Use a bike when referring to any bike, rather than a specific one already mentioned.

× As we see, the easiest transportation is.

✓ As we can see, a bike is one of the easiest means of transportation.

The original sentence ends with is but does not provide the complement needed to complete the idea. Add a complement, such as one of the easiest means of transportation, to form a complete sentence.