Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 你直接回答了问题，也提到了和朋友骑车去公园，但有多处语法错误，影响理解。例如，“when I was child”应为“when I was a child”，“I always by bike”应改为“I often rode my bike”。描述过去的经历时，要保持过去时态一致；“this will”没有表达完整意思，建议删去。可以用一到两个具体细节完整地说明你们在公园做什么。

Example: Yes, I did. When I was a child, I often rode my bike to the park with a friend. We would ride around together and look at the flowers and the beautiful scenery.

Suggestion: 你给出了明确的肯定回答，并提到了价格和健康方面的理由，但部分表达不自然或不完整。“Special's price”不符合语境，可直接说“bikes are cheaper than cars”；“better for my healthy”应为“better for my health”。最后的“they can make me feel”没有说完，建议补充完整结果，或删除这部分。用连接词“also”补充第二个理由，会让回答更连贯。

Example: Yes, they are. Bikes are popular because they are much cheaper than cars and are a healthy way to get around. They are also convenient for short trips, especially in busy areas.

× When I was child

✓ When I was a child

单数可数名词 child 前通常需要冠词。这里指“一个孩子”，应在 child 前加不定冠词 a。

× I always by bike, uh, go to the park with my friend.

✓ I always rode my bike to the park with my friend.

问题问的是童年时的经历，应用过去时。表示“骑车”需要使用动词 ride，其过去式是 rode；原句中的 go 也应改为过去式 went，不过此处用 rode my bike to the park 表达更自然。

× We are by bicycle together.

✓ We rode our bicycles together.

这句话描述过去的经历，因此不应使用现在时 are。表示过去一起骑车，可以用 ride 的过去式 rode。

× We two look, uh, flower and another beautiful views.

✓ The two of us looked at flowers and other beautiful views.

句子描述的是过去的活动，look 应改为过去式 looked。

× We two look, uh, flower and another beautiful views.

✓ The two of us looked at flowers and other beautiful views.

look 表示“看某物”时，后面通常需要加介词 at，再接看的对象。

× We two look, uh, flower and another beautiful views.

✓ The two of us looked at flowers and other beautiful views.

这里泛指看到多朵花，flower 应使用复数形式 flowers。

× We two look, uh, flower and another beautiful views.

✓ The two of us looked at flowers and other beautiful views.

another 只能修饰单数可数名词，不能直接修饰复数 views。修饰复数名词时应使用 other。

× Yes, because Special's price is uh, cheaper than car

✓ Yes, because the price of a bicycle is lower than that of a car.

原句把 price（价格）和 car（汽车）直接比较，比较对象不一致。应比较自行车的价格和汽车的价格，因此可以说 the price of a bicycle is lower than that of a car。

× by bicycle is better for my healthy

✓ Riding a bicycle is better for my health.

healthy 是形容词，表示“健康的”；这里介词 for 后需要名词作宾语，应使用 health（健康）。