Part 1
Examiner
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidate
Yes. I have a bike it. It's very beautiful.
Examiner
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidate
Yes, my country, people. Very like back.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Score: 35.0Suggestion: 你表达了肯定的回答,但语法和时态有误:“I have a bike it”不自然;题目问童年经历,应使用过去时。先直接回答,再补充一两处具体细节,例如自行车的颜色或你如何使用它。
Example: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was bright red, and I often rode it around my neighbourhood.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Score: 15.0Suggestion: 目前的表达不完整,听者难以理解你的意思。可以用完整句直接回答:“Bikes are popular in my country.” 注意使用“people in my country”作为主语,并用“like riding bikes”表达“喜欢骑自行车”。再补充一个具体原因或使用场景。
Example: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them to work or school because they are convenient and affordable.
× Yes. I have a bike it.
✓ Yes, I had a bike.
问题问的是小时候的经历,因此回答应使用过去时。这里应把 have 改为 had。此外,bike 后多余的 it 也应删除;如果要用代词,应另起一句说 It was beautiful。
× Yes. I have a bike it.
✓ Yes, I had a bike.
bike 后面的 it 多余,不能直接放在名词后面重复指代。可以删除 it;如果要用代词,应另起一句,例如 It was beautiful。
× It's very beautiful.
✓ It was very beautiful.
这句话描述的是小时候的自行车,应使用过去时。将 is 的过去式 was 用于此处。
× Yes, my country, people. Very like back.
✓ Yes, people in my country like bikes very much.
原句的词序不正确,而且后半句缺少清楚、完整的主谓结构。可以用 people in my country 作主语、like 作谓语,并根据问题补出宾语 bikes;very much 放在动词和宾语之后,表示“非常喜欢”。