Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答内容具体，有生日礼物和年龄等细节，但要注意过去时：用“had”而不是“have”，用“rode”而不是“write”。“I just write that every day”表达不清，可以改成“I rode it every day”。减少“So”“just”等重复词，并用一个连接词自然引出回忆。

Example: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. When I was about seven, my dad gave me a little pink bike for my birthday. I rode it every day that summer, so it became one of my favourite childhood memories.

Suggestion: 先直接回答现在自行车是否受欢迎，再清楚比较普通自行车和电动自行车。注意主谓一致和名词形式，例如“bikes are”“electric bikes”；避免重复“I think”和“but”。“transfer more lawn”不自然，可表达为“carry heavier loads”或“travel longer distances”。还可以补充校园里使用自行车的具体原因。

Example: Yes, bikes are still popular in my country, although electric bikes are probably more common these days. They make it easier to travel longer distances, especially for people who commute to work. However, many students still ride regular bikes on campus because they are convenient and easy to park.

× Yes, of course I have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, of course I had a bike when I was a child.

这句话描述的是童年时的情况，时间背景是过去，因此 have 应改为过去式 had。建议根据句中的时间状语（如 when I was a child）统一使用过去时。

× Later that summer I just write that every day.

✓ Later that summer I rode it every day.

这句话讲述过去那个夏天发生的事情，应使用过去时。ride 的过去式是 rode；此外，用 it 指代前文的自行车更恰当。

× And just such a great memory to me.

✓ And it was such a great memory for me.

原句缺少谓语动词，不能构成完整句子。补上主语 it 和过去式谓语 was 后，句子结构完整。

× When I was a child I think bike are very popular.

✓ When I was a child, I think bikes were very popular.

这里的 bike 泛指自行车这一类事物，应使用复数 bikes。表示复数时不能使用单数名词 bike。

× When I was a child I think bike are very popular.

✓ When I was a child, I think bikes were very popular.

句子谈论的是小时候自行车受欢迎的情况，时间在过去，因此 be 动词应使用过去式 were，而不是现在时 are。

× And but for now I think electronic bike is more popular than bike.

✓ But now I think electronic bikes are more popular than regular bikes.

and 和 but 在这里同时连接转折内容，属于连接词重复使用。保留表示转折的 but 即可。

× I think electronic bike is more popular than bike.

✓ I think electronic bikes are more popular than regular bikes.

这里是在比较两类自行车，应使用复数形式 electronic bikes 和 regular bikes。描述一类事物时，通常使用复数名词。

× We still use bike at campus right now.

✓ We still use bikes on campus right now.

泛指平时使用的自行车时，应使用复数 bikes，而不是单数 bike。

× We still use bike at campus right now.

✓ We still use bikes on campus right now.

表示“在校园里”时，通常使用介词 on，表达为 on campus，而不是 at campus。