Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 先直接回答过去的情况，并注意使用过去时：用 “I didn’t have” 而不是 “I don’t have”。“I am both in a poor family” 表达不自然，可改为 “My family was quite poor”。说明父母当时买不起自行车即可；注意说 “couldn’t afford to buy me a bike”，并用 because 衔接原因。

Example: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family was quite poor, so my parents couldn’t afford to buy me one.

Suggestion: 回答切题，也提供了南宁这一具体信息。请注意语法：“where have many bike” 应改为 “where there are many bikes”。可以再补充一个具体细节，例如人们骑自行车通勤或使用共享单车，让答案更充分；注意 bikes 要用复数。

Example: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. I live in Nanning, where there are many shared bikes. People often use them to get around the city, especially for short trips.

× No, I don't have a bike because I am both in a poor family.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike because I was from a poor family.

问题背景是询问你小时候的情况，因此应使用过去时。将“don't have”改为“didn't have”，将“am”改为“was”。

× My parents don't have money buy a buy give me.

✓ My parents didn't have money to buy a bike for me.

这里描述的是小时候的情况，应使用过去时，所以将“don't have”改为“didn't have”。

× My parents don't have money buy a buy give me.

✓ My parents didn't have money to buy a bike for me.

表达“有钱做某事”时，应使用“have money to do something”的结构；“买一辆自行车给我”可以说“buy a bike for me”。原句中的“money buy a buy give me”结构不完整且不正确。

× I live in Nanning where have many bike.

✓ I live in Nanning, where there are many bikes.

表达某地“有”某物时，应使用“There be”结构。这里可写成“where there are many bikes”，不能省略“there”。

× I live in Nanning where have many bike.

✓ I live in Nanning, where there are many bikes.

“many”后面应接可数名词复数，因此“bike”应改为“bikes”。