Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答直接，但“department”应改为“apartment”（公寓）；“I found this really interesting to cycle”表达不自然，可改为“I really enjoyed cycling”。另外，“小时候没有自行车”和“大学才学会骑车”的时间关系可以表达得更清楚。

Example: No, I didn’t have a bike as a child because my family lived in a small apartment. I learned to ride one in college, and I really enjoyed cycling around the campus.

Suggestion: 回答清楚，并提供了具体例子。注意“economy”是名词，此处应使用形容词“economical”，也可以用更自然的“affordable”。建议在列举原因时保持并列结构，并在句末补上句号。

Example: Yes, absolutely. Bikes are quite popular in my country, especially for short trips around cities, because they’re affordable, convenient, and a good way to exercise. For example, many students and office workers cycle to nearby schools or workplaces instead of taking the bus or subway.

× I found this really interesting to cycle around the campus.

✓ I found it really interesting to cycle around the campus.

在“find + 宾语 + 形容词 + to do”结构中，需要用形式宾语 it 指代后面的不定式短语“to cycle around the campus”。这里的 this 不能正确充当该结构中的形式宾语。建议记住句型：find it + 形容词 + to do。

× Bicycles are widely used in my country, especially for short trips in cities because they're cheap, economy and good exercise.

✓ Bicycles are widely used in my country, especially for short trips in cities because they're cheap, economical and good exercise.

这里需要用形容词 economical（经济实惠的）与 cheap（便宜的）并列描述自行车。economy 是名词，不能在此处作为形容词使用。建议注意词性，并使用 economical 来描述物品的成本或经济性。