Bike— Part 1 Report

PracticePart12026-10-17 08:06:55

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Part 1

Examiner

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Candidate

Yes, I have a bike when I was a child because it's important to learn how to bike. It's a necessary skill.

Examiner

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Candidate

Yes, bikes are really popular in my country and almost every family have at least one bike and when you get to China you will see like in every city there are many shared bikes in the streets and that is the sign.

Evaluation

Overall

Overall: 5.5Fluency & Coherence: 5.5Pronunciation: 5.5Grammar: 5.0Lexical Resource: 5.5

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Score: 63.0

Suggestion: 先直接回答问题,并注意过去时:将“have”改为“had”。“learn how to bike”和“a necessary skill”表达重复,可以合并;再补充一个具体细节,例如谁教你骑车或你通常在哪里骑。

Example: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father taught me how to ride it, and I often practised in the park near our home.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Score: 58.0

Suggestion: 回答内容切题,也提供了共享单车这一具体例子,但整句过长,建议拆成两到三句,并使用“because”或“for example”等连接词。注意主谓一致:“every family has”;避免口语填充词“like”,并把“that is the sign”改成明确说明共享单车体现了什么。

Example: Yes, bikes are quite popular in China. Many families own at least one, and shared bikes are available on the streets in most cities. Their widespread use shows how convenient cycling is for short trips.

Grammar

5: Past tense issue(一般过去时错误)

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child because it's important to learn how to bike. It's a necessary skill.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child because it's important to learn how to bike. It's a necessary skill.

句子中的“when I was a child”明确表示过去,因此描述当时拥有自行车的动作也应使用一般过去时。把“have”改为“had”。

2: Third person singular issue(第三人称单数错误)

× Yes, bikes are really popular in my country and almost every family have at least one bike and when you get to China you will see like in every city there are many shared bikes in the streets and that is the sign.

✓ Yes, bikes are really popular in my country and almost every family has at least one bike and when you get to China you will see like in every city there are many shared bikes in the streets and that is the sign.

“every family”表示每一个家庭,语法上作单数主语,因此一般现在时中应使用第三人称单数动词“has”,而不是“have”。可以记住:every + 单数名词作主语时,谓语动词通常用第三人称单数形式。

Vocabulary

Important— Significant; Main; Powerful
Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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