Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答切题，并用七岁时买到第一辆自行车补充了具体信息。建议在“Yes”后加逗号，并用更自然的表达连接年龄和经历；还可以补充一项细节，例如自行车的颜色或你骑车时的感受。

Example: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was seven. It was a small red bike, and I loved riding it around my neighborhood.

Suggestion: 你表达了支持骑自行车的态度，也提到了环保理由，但没有清楚说明自行车在你们国家是否受欢迎。“it”指代不够明确，而且“will make”不太适合描述普遍事实。建议直接回答受欢迎程度，再用现在时说明原因，并补充一个具体例子。

Example: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in crowded cities. Many people use them for short trips because they are convenient and produce no air pollution.

× Yes, it will make the environment better.

✓ Yes, they make the environment better.

“Bikes”是复数名词，因此应使用复数代词“they”，不能用单数代词“it”。建议先确认代词指代的名词是单数还是复数，并保持一致。

× Yes, it will make the environment better.

✓ Yes, they make the environment better.

这里是在陈述自行车通常对环境的影响，属于一般事实，应使用一般现在时“make”，而不是表示将来的“will make”。回答有关普遍情况的问题时，通常使用一般现在时。