Part 1
Examiner
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidate
Yes, it's my first support with me. It's interesting. I use it to learning bike in my countryside is learning is a.
Examiner
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidate
No, because they have other transportation in the route noted by. It's dangerous interchange. Start accommodation to work.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Score: 20.0Suggestion: 回答内容目前较难理解,尤其是“my first support with me”和“use it to learning bike”不符合自然表达。先直接回答是否有自行车,再说明你在哪里或如何学会骑车;注意使用过去时,例如“had”和“learned”。
Example: Yes, I had a small bike when I was a child. I learned to ride it in the countryside, where there were quiet roads and plenty of space.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Score: 15.0Suggestion: 先清楚表达自行车是否受欢迎,再用一两个具体原因支持观点。可以提到人们更常使用汽车或公共交通,以及繁忙道路上的骑行安全问题。避免使用意思不明确的词组;可用“busy roads”“public transport”和“commute to work”等表达。
Example: No, I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. Many people prefer cars or public transport because they are more convenient for commuting. Also, cycling can feel unsafe on busy roads.
× Yes, it's my first support with me.
✓ Yes, it was my first support with me.
问题类型 ID:5(过去时错误)。这里是在回答小时候是否有自行车,语境指过去,因此应将一般现在时 “it's” 改为一般过去时 “it was”。
× I use it to learning bike in my countryside is learning is a.
✓ I used it to learn to ride a bike in the countryside.
问题类型 ID:5(过去时错误)。学生谈论小时候使用自行车,应使用过去时 “used”,而不是现在时 “use”。
× I use it to learning bike in my countryside is learning is a.
✓ I used it to learn to ride a bike in the countryside.
问题类型 ID:8(动词 + -ing 形式错误)。表示目的的 “to” 后面应接动词原形,所以应说 “to learn”,不能说 “to learning”。表达学习骑自行车时,可以说 “learn to ride a bike”。
× It's dangerous interchange.
✓ It's a dangerous interchange.
问题类型 ID:22(冠词错误)。单数可数名词 “interchange” 前需要冠词;这里是泛指,因此应加不定冠词 “a”。