Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 先直接回答“有”或“没有”，再补充一两个具体细节。注意讲过去的经历时使用过去时，例如用“bought”代替“buy”，用“practised”代替“will practice”。原回答中的部分表达不清楚，建议删去或换成完整、容易理解的句子。

Example: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a bike when I was about six, and I practised riding it in the playground every day. My older brother sometimes helped me.

Suggestion: 先明确表达自行车现在是否受欢迎，再用对比说明变化。避免使用“before the 2010 year”和“popular then bike”这类不自然的表达；可以说“before 2010”以及“more popular than bikes”。如果提到时间变化，请确保前后时态和逻辑清楚。

Example: Bikes used to be very popular in my country, especially before 2010. However, cars and motorbikes have become more common in recent years because they are faster and more convenient for long journeys.

× Yeah, I have a brother and I was trial that's my parents buy it for me and I will practice it every day in the playground.

✓ Yeah, I have a brother, and my parents bought it for me. I practiced it every day in the playground.

回答询问的是小时候的经历，因此“父母买车”和“每天练习”都应使用过去时。“buy”应改为“bought”；“will practice”表示将来，应改为“practiced”。原句中的“I was trial that's”意思不清，无法仅凭上下文确定其本意，因此没有擅自改写。

× Before the 2010 year is yes it's very popular in my country but after 2020 motor and car are popular then bike.

✓ Before 2010, yes, bikes were very popular in my country, but after 2020, motorcycles and cars became more popular than bikes.

“Before 2010”指过去的时间，因此应使用过去时。“is”应改为“were”来描述当时自行车很受欢迎；“became”则表达2020年之后受欢迎程度发生了变化。

× Before the 2010 year is yes it's very popular in my country but after 2020 motor and car are popular then bike.

✓ Before 2010, yes, bikes were very popular in my country, but after 2020, motorcycles and cars became more popular than bikes.

这里是在比较汽车和自行车的受欢迎程度，应使用“more popular than”（比……更受欢迎）。不能用“popular then bike”表达比较；比较对象应放在“than”之后。

× Before the 2010 year is yes it's very popular in my country but after 2020 motor and car are popular then bike.

✓ Before 2010, yes, bikes were very popular in my country, but after 2020, motorcycles and cars became more popular than bikes.

这里说的是自行车、摩托车和汽车这一类交通工具，而不是某一辆车，因此应使用复数形式“bikes”“motorcycles”和“cars”。注意，复数名词通常在词尾加“-s”或“-es”。