Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 先直接回答问题，再补充一两个具体细节。注意过去时：把“when I am young, I have”改为“when I was young, I had”；“shooted”不是这里合适的表达。如果你想说十二岁时不再骑了，可以说“I stopped riding it when I was twelve”。最后一句没有说完，建议补充骑车的用途或感受。

Example: Yes, I had a small folding bike when I was a child. I rode it around my neighbourhood and sometimes went to the park with my friends. I stopped using it when I was about twelve because I had outgrown it.

Suggestion: 先明确回答“自行车是否受欢迎”，避免只说“Never popular”而没有完整句子。接着说明原因，并使用准确的词语，例如“subway stations”“public buses”和“cars”。你可以比较过去和现在，或举例说明人们为什么较少骑自行车。

Example: Bikes aren’t as popular as they used to be in my country. Many people prefer taking the subway or public buses because public transport is convenient, and some people drive cars to work. However, cycling is still popular for exercise and short trips.

× Yes, when I am young, I have a little bike you can fold and it is very small.

✓ Yes, when I was young, I had a little bike that you could fold, and it was very small.

这段话是在回忆童年经历，因此相关动词应使用过去时。把“am”改为“was”，把“have”改为“had”，并把描述当时自行车大小的“is”改为“was”。建议先判断叙述时间：讲过去的经历时，主要动词通常要保持过去时。

× It shooted me when I was twelve years old.

✓ It shot me when I was twelve years old.

“shoot”的过去式是不规则变化“shot”，不能加“-ed”写成“shooted”。不过，“shot me”通常表示“射中了我”，如果这里想表达其他意思，需要根据原意换用合适的动词。

× Never popular because nowadays there's a stab station and Gongja bus and the other like cars we use the bike list.

✓ Bikes are not very popular because nowadays there are subway stations, buses, and other options, like cars, so we use bikes less.

原句以“Never popular”开头，缺少主语和谓语，不能独立构成完整句子；后面的内容也缺少清晰的连接和完整结构。可先补出主语和系动词，例如“Bikes are not very popular”，再用“because”说明原因。这里将听写中不清楚的词按上下文理解为“subway stations”和“buses”；如果并非原意，应替换为实际想表达的词。

× Never popular because nowadays there's a stab station and Gongja bus and the other like cars we use the bike list.

✓ Bikes are not very popular because nowadays there are subway stations, buses, and other options, like cars, so we use bikes less.

原句用“there's”引出多个并列事物。表示“有”时，若后面的并列名词整体为复数，应使用“there are”。建议检查“there be”结构中 be 动词与后面名词的单复数是否一致。