Part 1
Examiner
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidate
No, I didn't And when I when Madam child I rider back
Examiner
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidate
No I don't because our country is electric backers popular.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Score: 15.0Suggestion: 你用“No”直接回答了问题,但后面的表达难以理解,存在明显的语法和发音转写问题。回答时先说清楚自己小时候有没有自行车;如果想补充,可以说明原因或当时的经历。注意使用正确的过去时,例如“when I was a child”和“rode a bike”。
Example: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family didn’t think I needed one, so I usually walked to school.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Score: 30.0Suggestion: 你给出了明确观点和原因,但“electric backers”表达不准确,可能想说“electric bikes”。此外,电动自行车本身也属于自行车,因此最好说明你指的是普通自行车,并用一个具体细节解释原因。注意在“No”后使用逗号,并确保句子表达完整、自然。
Example: Not really. In my country, ordinary bicycles are less popular than electric bikes because people can travel farther and get around more quickly on them.
× And when I when Madam child I rider back
✓ When I was a child, I rode a bike.
这句话是在回忆童年经历,应使用过去时。表示“是”要用过去式 was,ride 的过去式是 rode。原句的词序也不完整,建议使用“When I was a child, I...”来表达“当我还是个孩子时”。
× No I don't because our country is electric backers popular.
✓ No, I don't, because electric bikes are popular in our country.
原句中“our country is electric bikes popular”的语序不正确。可以先说受欢迎的事物“electric bikes”,再用“are popular”描述它们,最后补充地点“in our country”。