Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 先直接回答“没有自己的自行车”，再说明父母的自行车太大，最后补充一个清楚的细节。注意使用过去时：用“didn’t have”“were”，避免重复“but”，并把“bring me to the bicycle”改成具体表达，例如“let me ride with them”或“take me along on their bikes”。

Example: I didn’t have a bike of my own when I was a child. My parents had bicycles, but they were too big for me to ride. Sometimes, they took me along when they went out.

Suggestion: 你的理由实际上说明自行车很受欢迎，因此开头的“I don’t think so”与后文矛盾。先明确回答“很受欢迎”，再说明共享单车方便、省力，并用“shared bikes”代替“mobile bike”。避免重复使用“because”，可以用“mainly because”连接原因。

Example: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in China, especially shared bikes. They’re convenient for short trips, and people can easily find one using a mobile app. They’re also a good way to avoid traffic and save time.

× Actually I do not have a bike myself when I was young.

✓ Actually, I did not have a bike myself when I was young.

句子中的“when I was young”表示过去，因此“do not have”应改为一般过去时“did not have”。过去时否定句的结构是“did not + 动词原形”。

× My parents do have bikes.

✓ My parents had bikes.

这里描述的是说话人小时候父母拥有自行车的情况，属于过去，因此应将“do have”改为过去式“had”。

× Their bicycles are too big for me.

✓ Their bicycles were too big for me.

这句话描述的是过去的情况，应使用一般过去时。“are”是现在时，过去式应为“were”。

× When they went for work.

✓ When they went to work.

表示“去上班”时，固定搭配是“go to work”，而不是“go for work”。

× Nowadays in China most people choose to use mobile bike for work or hang out.

✓ Nowadays in China, most people choose to use mobile bikes for work or to hang out.

“bike”是可数名词，这里泛指人们使用的自行车，应使用复数“bikes”。此外，补上“to”可使“to use”和“to hang out”的结构更平行。

× Most of the people think mobile bike is more convenient.

✓ Most people think mobile bikes are more convenient.

这里泛指一类自行车，应使用复数“bikes”，因此对应的动词也应使用复数形式“are”。

× Mobile bike is more convenient and is more effort saving.

✓ Mobile bikes are more convenient and require less effort.

“effort saving”在这里搭配不自然。表达“更省力”时，可以说“require less effort”（需要更少的力气）。