Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 質問には答えられていますが、「when I was a nine inch tall」は意味が不明瞭です。年齢を言いたい場合は「when I was nine years old」としましょう。また、「I remember that I every day practicing」は文法的に不自然なので、「I remember practicing every day」のように表現できます。練習したときの様子や気持ちを一つ加えると、より具体的になります。

Example: Yes, I got my first bike when I was about nine years old. I remember practicing in the park every day after school, and I was really excited when I finally learned to ride it.

Suggestion: 自転車が人気だという意見は明確ですが、「every Japanese people are having bike」は不自然です。「Many people in Japan own bicycles」などを使いましょう。また、「a lot of like nature and the road for bicycle」は意味が曖昧なので、どのような場所や道路があるのか具体的に述べてください。「So yes, I think so」は直前の内容と重複するため、省くと簡潔です。

Example: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in Japan. Many people use them for short trips, such as commuting to a nearby station or going shopping. In addition, bike lanes and scenic cycling routes make cycling convenient and enjoyable.

× Yes, I got a bike when I was a nine inch tall, I guess.

✓ Yes, I got a bike when I was nine inches tall, I guess.

Use the plural noun inches after the number nine. Also, do not use a before the height expression nine inches tall.

× I remember that I every day, uh practicing to ride a bike.

✓ I remember that I practiced riding a bike every day.

The original clause has no finite verb after I. Use practiced to form a complete clause, and put every day after the activity it describes. After practice, use the -ing form riding.

× Absolutely, yes, because every Japanese people are having bike

✓ Absolutely, yes, because every Japanese person has a bike.

Every is followed by a singular noun, so use person rather than people. The singular subject every Japanese person takes has. Use the simple present has to describe possession, and add a before the singular countable noun bike.

× and also there's a lot of like nature and the road for bicycle.

✓ There is a lot of nature, and there are many roads for bicycles.

Use there is with the uncountable noun nature, and there are with the plural noun roads. The original combines these nouns under a single there is construction, which makes the verb agreement unclear.

× and also there's a lot of like nature and the road for bicycle.

✓ There is a lot of nature, and there are many roads for bicycles.

When speaking generally, use the plural roads and bicycles rather than the singular road and bicycle. Nature is uncountable, so it correctly remains singular.