Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Trả lời trực tiếp bằng thì quá khứ vì câu hỏi hỏi về thời thơ ấu: dùng “I had” và “when I was a child”. Dùng đúng động từ “ride a bike” thay vì “buy a bike”. Sau đó thêm một chi tiết cụ thể, chẳng hạn bạn thường đạp xe đi đâu. Cố gắng nói thành câu rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ.

Example: Yes, I had a small bike when I was a child. I loved riding it to school and around my neighborhood.

Suggestion: Nêu rõ quan điểm ngay từ đầu, chẳng hạn “Yes, bikes are quite popular”. Phân biệt các nhóm người bằng cách diễn đạt tự nhiên như “children and teenagers”; không cần dùng “pupil” nếu bạn muốn nói chung về trẻ em. Phần cuối câu hiện chưa rõ nghĩa—hãy giải thích cụ thể ai thường đi xe đạp và vì sao, hoặc đưa ra ví dụ về người lớn.

Example: Yes, bikes are quite popular among children and teenagers in my country. Many of them ride bikes to school or around their neighborhoods. Adults also use them for exercise, although many prefer motorbikes for commuting.

× Yes, of course I have a buy when I a child and this is a small one I love to buy buy go to school and go around my home.

✓ Yes, of course. I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small one, and I loved riding it to school and around my home.

The question asks about the past, so use past-tense verbs: had, was, and loved. The phrase ‘when I a child’ needs the past-tense verb was. ‘Buy’ does not fit the intended meaning here; ‘bike’ and ‘ride’ make the sentence understandable.

× I think it's popular with the children and all the pupil but with the teen pupil and your for example my father and mother know popular wish by

✓ I think bikes are popular with children and pupils, but not with teenagers. For example, my father and mother do not think bikes are popular.

The question is about bikes, which is plural, so use they or repeat bikes rather than it. Use the plural pronoun and verb agreement: ‘bikes are popular.’ The original ending is unclear, so the correction expresses the likely intended meaning.

× I think it's popular with the children and all the pupil but with the teen pupil and your for example my father and mother know popular wish by

✓ I think bikes are popular with children and pupils, but not with teenagers. For example, my father and mother do not think bikes are popular.

The words ‘all’ and ‘teenagers’ refer to more than one person, so use plural nouns: pupils and teenagers. For general statements, ‘children’ and ‘pupils’ usually do not need the definite article ‘the.’