Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlamanız ve bisikletinizin özelliklerinden bahsetmeniz iyi. Ancak “My dads” yerine tek bir kişiden söz ediyorsanız “My dad”, “reds” yerine “red” kullanın. Geçmişten bahsettiğiniz için “has” fiilini “had” olarak değiştirin; bisikletteki zil için “a bell” daha doğal bir ifadedir. Cümleleri “It was red and had…” şeklinde birleştirerek daha akıcı konuşabilirsiniz.

Example: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My dad bought it for me, and it was red with big wheels and a bell.

Suggestion: Fikrinizi belirtmişsiniz, ancak karşılaştırma ve gerekçedeki ifadeler anlaşılmıyor. “It’s not as common as past” yerine “They’re not as popular as they used to be” deyin. “Turkish” yerine bağlama göre “people in Turkey” kullanın; “policy” ve “curse” bu anlamda uygun değil. Trafiğin yoğun olduğunu kastediyorsanız “heavy traffic” ifadesini kullanıp düşüncenizi kısa bir nedenle destekleyin.

Example: Yes, bikes are popular in some parts of Turkey, but they may be less common than they used to be. Heavy traffic can make cycling difficult, especially in large cities.

× My dads bought it for me.

✓ My dad bought it for me.

The singular possessive form dad is appropriate if the student is referring to one parent. Use dads only when referring to more than one father.

× It was reds.

✓ It was red.

Red describes the singular noun it, so it should not take a plural ending. Adjectives in English do not change form to agree with singular or plural nouns.

× It was reds and it has big wheels and it has a ring.

✓ It was red, and it had big wheels and a ring.

The student is describing a bike from childhood, so the past tense had is more consistent with was. The repeated it has is also unnecessary; combine the details using and.

× Yes, I think so but it's not as common as past because Turkish are really policy and there is too much curse in the traffic.

✓ Yes, I think so, but it's not as common as it was in the past because Turkish people are really policy and there is too much curse in the traffic.

The comparison needs a complete comparison object: as common as it was in the past. The remaining wording is not corrected because its problems appear to involve word choice rather than a grammar type in the list.