Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Answer more naturally by saying “my parents gave it to me” instead of “it was gifted by my parents to me.” Also, check the character’s name and avoid an unnecessary ending such as “yeah, that was pretty much it.” You could add one specific detail about how you used the bike to make the answer more vivid.

Example: Yes, I did. My parents gave me a pink bike for my birthday when I was about six. It had sparkles and Barbie stickers on it because Barbie was my favorite character at the time. I used to ride it around our neighborhood every afternoon.

Suggestion: Avoid the contradictory phrase “relatively more or less prevalent” and use a direct expression such as “fairly popular” or “widely used.” Replace “the lower class people” with the more natural and respectful phrase “people on lower incomes.” You should also provide a more specific explanation, such as mentioning traffic, exercise, or environmental benefits, and use a linking word to connect the ideas.

Example: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in smaller cities. They are an affordable and convenient way to get around, particularly for people on lower incomes. In addition, many people ride them for exercise and to avoid heavy traffic.