Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 「when I was children」は不自然なので、1人の過去を表す「when I was a child」にします。最初に明確な答えを述べ、その後に現在との対比を加える構成は良いです。ただし、「but」の前後をより自然につなげるため、「I have one now」と言うと効果的です。

Example: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child, but I have one now. I usually ride it around my neighborhood on weekends.

Suggestion: 質問は「自国で自転車が人気か」という内容なので、まず「Yes, I think they are popular」または「No, I don’t think they are very popular」と直接答えてください。その後、人気の理由や具体例を1～2文で説明します。「My city are no train」は「There are no trains in my city」、「I have bike」は「I have a bike」と言い換えます。現在の回答は文の区切りと意味が不明確で、質問への直接的な回答も不足しているため、短く明瞭な文を使うことが重要です。

Example: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in smaller cities. There are no trains in my city, so many people use bikes to travel short distances. They are also inexpensive and convenient.

× No, I didn't have a bike when I was children but I have a bike now.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but I have a bike now.

The noun child must be singular because the subject is I and the sentence refers to one person. Children is the plural form of child, so it cannot be used after I was in this context. The phrase when I was a child is correct.

× My city are no train

✓ There are no trains in my city.

To say that something exists or does not exist, use the there is or there are structure. Because trains is plural, use there are. The word there is also required in this sentence.

× My city are no train

✓ There are no trains in my city.

Train must be plural because the sentence means that the city has no trains at all. Use trains, not train. The corrected sentence also uses the natural there are structure.

× I have bike

✓ I have a bike.

A singular countable noun such as bike normally needs an article. Use a before bike when mentioning one nonspecific bike.

× I have a bike also

✓ I also have a bike.

Also usually comes before the main verb have when it adds information to a sentence. The position I also have a bike is more natural and grammatically appropriate here.