Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cevabınız soruya doğrudan yanıt veriyor ve bisikletinizin rengi ile üzerindeki süslemeler gibi özgül ayrıntılar içeriyor. Ancak “I would go” yapısı geçmişte tekrarlanan eylemler için kullanılabilir olsa da burada “I rode it every day” daha doğal olur. “a pink sparkles” yerine “pink sparkles”, “on the sitting” yerine “on the seat” veya “a fluffy pink cover on the seat” demelisiniz. “and” kelimesinin tekrarı ve “umm” gibi dolgu ifadeleri akıcılığı azaltıyor; cevabı daha düzenli ve en fazla dört cümleyle vermeye çalışın.

Example: Yes, I had a pink bike when I was a child. I loved it, and I rode it to the park with my friends almost every day. It had pink sparkles and a fluffy pink cover on the seat, so it looked very special to me.

Suggestion: Ana fikriniz anlaşılabiliyor; ancak cevapta bisikletlerin ülkenizde ne kadar popüler olduğu net biçimde açıklanmamış. “cars more than bike or scooters” yerine “people use cars more often than bikes or scooters” ve “a option” yerine “an option” kullanmalısınız. Elektrikli bisiklet hizmetini anlatırken “you can rent one through an app” ifadesi daha doğal olur. Son cümle gramer açısından anlaşılmıyor; “They are particularly popular among tourists” şeklinde açık ve doğru bir sonuç cümlesi kurun. “So”, “uh” ve “like” gibi dolgu ifadelerini azaltarak fikirlerinizi topic sentence, supporting detail ve sonuç şeklinde düzenleyin.

Example: Bikes are not as popular as cars in my country, although many people use electric bikes in large cities. These bikes can be rented through a mobile app, which makes them convenient for short journeys. They are especially popular among tourists who want to explore the city.

× It also had a pink sparkles on it, I think.

✓ It also had pink sparkles on it, I think.

The plural noun sparkles cannot be used with the singular article a. Use pink sparkles without an article, or use a pink sparkle for one sparkle.

× It also had a pink sparkles on it, I think.

✓ It also had pink sparkles on it, I think.

The article a is used only before a singular countable noun. Because sparkles is plural, the article should be omitted.

× A fluffy a pink thing on the sitting.

✓ A fluffy pink thing on the seat.

The article a should appear only once before the complete noun phrase. The correct order is a + adjective + adjective + noun: a fluffy pink thing.

× A fluffy a pink thing on the sitting.

✓ A fluffy pink thing on the seat.

When two adjectives describe a noun, they normally appear before the noun without an extra article between them. The correct phrase is fluffy pink thing.

× They use cars more than bike or scooters.

✓ They use cars more than bikes or scooters.

The sentence refers to bikes in general, so the countable noun bike should be plural: bikes. The nouns cars, bikes, and scooters should be parallel in number.

× There is a option for bikes, electric bikes.

✓ There is an option for bikes, including electric bikes.

Use an before a singular countable noun beginning with a vowel sound. Option begins with a vowel sound, so a option must become an option.

× So you can, like, ride it.

✓ So you can, like, ride them.

The pronoun it refers to one thing, but the sentence refers to bikes, which is plural. Use the plural object pronoun them.

× You should download it from the app and you can ride it like that.

✓ You should download the app, and then you can ride them that way.

The app is the thing that should be downloaded, so it is clearer to use the noun phrase the app. The bikes are plural, so ride them is required instead of ride it.

× Otherwise I think tourists it's more they are.

✓ Otherwise, I think tourists use them more.

The original sentence contains an incorrect and incomplete sentence structure. After I think, use a complete clause with a subject and verb: tourists use them.