Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời có ý chính nhưng nhiều cụm từ không rõ nghĩa và lỗi ngữ pháp nghiêm trọng, chẳng hạn “when I was try”, “The bicycle is world watch” và “have to bite”. Em nên trả lời trực tiếp bằng thì quá khứ: “I had a bicycle when I was a child.” Sau đó, thêm nguồn gốc của chiếc xe và một kỷ niệm cụ thể, đồng thời dùng từ nối như “because” hoặc “and”. Câu trả lời nên dài khoảng 2–3 câu, tránh lặp từ “bicycle” quá nhiều.

Example: Absolutely. I had a bicycle when I was a child. It was a gift from my father, and I really loved riding it to school. I still remember how excited I felt when I first learned to ride it.

Suggestion: Em đã đưa ra được quan điểm rằng xe đạp không phổ biến bằng xe máy ở Việt Nam và có đề cập đến Hà Nội, nhưng câu trả lời còn nhiều lỗi về cấu trúc và cách dùng từ. Hãy nói rõ: “Bikes are not as popular as motorbikes in Vietnam.” Cần dùng số nhiều đúng là “motorbikes”, động từ “are” thay vì “is”, và diễn đạt ví dụ bằng “For example, in Hanoi, most people use motorbikes to commute.” Em cũng nên giảm các từ ngập ngừng như “umm” và bổ sung lý do cụ thể, chẳng hạn khoảng cách xa hoặc giao thông đông đúc.

Example: I don’t think bikes are very popular in Vietnam because motorbikes are more convenient for commuting. For example, in Hanoi, most people use motorbikes to travel through the busy streets. However, cycling is becoming more popular among young people and fitness enthusiasts.

× Absolutely yes when I was try I have a bicycle.

✓ Absolutely, yes. When I was a child, I had a bicycle.

The question asks about a past situation, so use the past tense had instead of the present tense have. The phrase when I was try is not grammatically correct; when I was a child clearly expresses the intended time.

× The bicycle is world watch my father and I really loved it.

✓ The bicycle was bought by my father, and I really loved it.

Use was because the action happened in the past. Bought is the past participle required in the passive structure was bought by. The conjunction and correctly connects the two related clauses.

× The past part about have to bite is half me dry in the school.

✓ The best part about having a bike was that it helped me get to school.

After the preposition about, use the -ing form having. Because the answer describes a past experience, use was and helped. The structure was that it helped me get to school forms a complete and clear sentence.

× I think it's not in my country such as Vietnam, umm, those motorbike is the most popular in my country.

✓ I do not think bikes are popular in my country, Vietnam. Motorbikes are the most popular form of transportation there.

Use the plural noun motorbikes because the sentence refers to motorbikes in general. The plural subject motorbikes requires the plural verb are. The present tense is appropriate because this describes a current situation.

× Uh, for example, it Hanoi umm, people helped uh, much more very motorbike.

✓ For example, in Hanoi, people use motorbikes much more frequently.

Use the preposition in before the city name: in Hanoi. Use the present-tense verb use because this is a current general situation. The adverb frequently should be placed after the object to describe how often people use motorbikes.