Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời hiện chưa truyền đạt được ý nghĩa rõ ràng và không trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi “có hay không”. Em nên bắt đầu bằng “Yes, I did” hoặc “No, I didn’t”, sau đó nêu một lý do cụ thể. Hãy dùng từ vựng phù hợp như “ride a bike”, “learn how to cycle” và “stay healthy”; đồng thời tránh các cụm từ không rõ nghĩa như “Enos Enos”. Một câu trả lời Part 1 nên dài khoảng 2–3 câu và có thể dùng “because” để liên kết lý do với câu trả lời chính.

Example: Yes, I did. I learned how to ride a bike when I was about six, and I often cycled around my neighborhood with my friends. It was a fun way to exercise and spend time outdoors.

Suggestion: Em đã cố gắng đưa ra quan điểm bắt đầu bằng “Not really”, nhưng phần còn lại chưa rõ nghĩa và chưa giải thích đầy đủ mức độ phổ biến của xe đạp. Em nên trả lời trực tiếp bằng cấu trúc “Yes, they are” hoặc “No, they aren’t”, sau đó nói rõ xe đạp phổ biến với nhóm nào, chẳng hạn trẻ em, và đưa ra lý do hoặc ví dụ. Cần chú ý ngữ pháp: dùng “bikes are popular”, không dùng “I popular”; đồng thời thay các từ không phù hợp bằng “among young children”, “for short distances” hoặc “because traffic is heavy”.

Example: Bikes are quite popular among young children in my country, but fewer adults use them for commuting. Children often ride bikes for fun, while adults usually prefer motorbikes because they are faster and more convenient for long distances.

× Enos Enos two allow us to learn or for my body.

✓ Yes, I did. It allowed me to learn and was good for my body.

Because the question asks about a past experience, the verbs should be in the past tense. Use allowed instead of allow and was instead of is. The original sentence is also unclear, so the correction assumes that the student meant the bike helped them learn and was good for their body.

× Enos Enos two allow us to learn or for my body.

✓ Yes, I did. It allowed me to learn and was good for my body.

The original sentence does not have a clear subject, verb structure, or logical connection between its ideas. A complete answer should begin with Yes, I did and then use a clear subject, such as it, followed by properly connected clauses.

× Not really but I popular in one my country's sufferable ball while young children.

✓ Not really, but bikes are popular in my country among young children.

The phrase I popular does not contain a correctly conjugated verb. Since bikes are the subject, use the verb are: bikes are popular. The correction also uses among young children to express the group in which bikes are popular.

× Not really but I popular in one my country's sufferable ball while young children.

✓ Not really, but bikes are popular in my country among young children.

The preposition phrase in one my country's is incorrect. Use in my country to identify the place and among young children to identify the group of people. Also, use among rather than while because the sentence refers to a group, not a time period.