Part 1
Examiner
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidate
Yeah, of course, sometimes I go to school by bike.
Examiner
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidate
Maybe know in my countries many peoples go to school or go to work by bus or by car.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Score: 62.0Suggestion: 回答基本直接,但时态错误:谈论童年经历应使用过去时,例如“went”或“rode”。此外,“go to school by bike”可以改为更自然的“ride my bike to school”。建议先明确回答,再补充频率或具体细节,并使用连接词使表达更连贯。
Example: Yes, I did. I often rode my bike to school when I was a child, especially when the weather was nice. It was convenient and I really enjoyed the freedom.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Score: 40.0Suggestion: 回答没有清楚表达“自行车是否流行”,而且存在多处语法和词汇问题:“Maybe know”应改为“Maybe not”,“my countries”应为“my country”,“many peoples”应为“many people”。建议先明确回答“Yes”或“No”,然后说明人们更常使用公交车或汽车,并补充一个原因,例如距离远、交通便利或天气因素。
Example: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. Many people commute to school or work by bus or car because the distances are quite long and public transport is convenient. However, cycling is becoming more common among young people for exercise.
× Yeah, of course, sometimes I go to school by bike.
✓ Yeah, of course. Sometimes I went to school by bike.
问题是时态不一致。问题使用了过去时“Did you have...”,因此回答童年经历时应使用过去时“went”,而不是现在时“go”。
× Maybe know in my countries many peoples go to school or go to work by bus or by car.
✓ Maybe not. In my country, many people go to school or go to work by bus or by car.
“Maybe know”不能构成正确、完整的表达;这里应使用“Maybe not”来回答“Do you think bikes are popular...?”。另外,“In my country”是更自然的地点表达。
× Maybe know in my countries many peoples go to school or go to work by bus or by car.
✓ Maybe not. In my country, many people go to school or go to work by bus or by car.
“people”本身就是复数形式,不能再加复数后缀变成“peoples”;“many people”表示“很多人”。如果指一个国家,应使用单数“country”,而不是“countries”。