Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Answer directly with the past tense “didn’t have.” Correct “I do not have” to “I didn’t have,” “I do not know” to “I didn’t know,” and “they don’t allow me” to “they didn’t allow me.” Avoid repeating the subject in “my parents they” and remove the unfinished phrase “because yeah.” Give one clear reason and, if possible, add a specific detail about another activity you did instead.

Example: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I didn’t know how to ride one, and my parents were worried that I might get hurt. Instead, I usually played football with my friends after school.

Suggestion: Use the natural collocation “popular in my country” instead of “famous in my nation,” and use “ride bikes” rather than “drive them.” Avoid repeating “people” and correct the unclear phrase “like zoos them for work,” probably to “use them for work.” Organize the answer with a clear reason and a specific example, using a linking word such as “because” or “also.”

Example: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially in smaller cities. Many people ride them to work or to nearby shops because they are affordable and convenient. Some people also decorate their bikes and use them for leisure trips at the weekend.

× No, I do not have a bike when I was a child because at that time even I do not know how to drive a bike and my parents they don't allow me to drive it because yeah.

✓ No, I did not have a bike when I was a child because, at that time, I did not know how to ride a bike, and my parents did not allow me to ride one.

The question asks about a past period, when you were a child, so the verbs should be in the past tense: did not have, did not know, and did not allow. Use ride a bike rather than drive a bike because ride is the usual verb for bicycles.

× No, I do not have a bike when I was a child because at that time even I do not know how to drive a bike and my parents they don't allow me to drive it because yeah.

✓ No, I did not have a bike when I was a child because, at that time, I did not know how to ride a bike, and my parents did not allow me to ride one.

The noun phrase my parents should not be followed by the unnecessary subject pronoun they. Use either my parents did not allow me or they did not allow me.

× No, I do not have a bike when I was a child because at that time even I do not know how to drive a bike and my parents they don't allow me to drive it because yeah.

✓ No, I did not have a bike when I was a child because, at that time, I did not even know how to ride a bike, and my parents did not allow me to ride one.

The adverb even should be placed before the main verb know. The natural word order is I did not even know, not even I did not know.

× Yes, bikes are very famous in my nation.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country.

Famous usually describes a person or thing that is well known. Popular describes something that many people like or use, so popular is the appropriate adjective here. Country is also more natural than nation in this everyday context.

× People love to drive them daily, people like zoos them for work.

✓ People love to ride them every day, and they like to use them for work.

The original sentence joins two independent clauses with only a comma, creating a comma splice. Use a conjunction such as and to connect the clauses. The word zoos does not fit the meaning; use is the correct verb.

× Most of the people also love to decorate their bike and go to different places.

✓ Most people also love to decorate their bikes and go to different places.

The possessive determiner their refers to plural people, so the noun should normally be plural: their bikes. Most people is also the more natural form when speaking generally.