Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cevabınız soruya doğrudan yanıt veriyor ve çocukluk anınızla ilgili destekleyici ayrıntılar içeriyor. Ancak “Yes, I had” yerine “Yes, I did” kullanılmalı; “three cycles” yerine “a tricycle”, “two cycle bicycle” yerine “a bicycle” veya “a two-wheeled bike” denmelidir. Ayrıca “try to write” ifadesi yanlış; doğrusu “tried to ride”. Olayları daha doğal bağlamak için “When”, “so” ve “because” gibi bağlaçları doğru şekilde kullanın ve gereksiz tekrarları azaltın.

Example: Yes, I did. I started by riding a tricycle, but when I saw my friends riding bicycles, I thought it looked really cool. I tried to ride a bicycle myself and eventually succeeded, so my family bought me one. I was very excited to have my own bike.

Suggestion: Ana fikriniz anlaşılır; ancak “at the Turkish” yerine “in Turkey”, “conjugation” yerine trafik bağlamında “congestion” veya “traffic congestion” kullanılmalıdır. “Ride bike” ifadesi “ride bikes” olmalı ve “bike sides, walking sides” yerine “bike lanes” veya “cycle paths” denmelidir. Cevabı ülkenizdeki genel durumu açıklayarak başlayın, ardından yolların ve trafiğin etkisini belirtin ve son olarak sahil bölgelerinde bisiklet kullanan kişilere örnek verin. “However” gibi bir bağlaç kullanarak karşıt fikri daha doğal biçimde bağlayabilirsiniz.

Example: No, I don’t think bikes are very popular in Turkey. Traffic congestion is a serious problem, and many roads are not in good condition, so cycling can be unsafe. However, some people ride bikes along the seaside, where there are often cycle paths and walking areas.

× Yes I had.

✓ Yes, I had one.

The verb had needs an object in this answer. The pronoun one replaces the noun bike and avoids repeating it.

× I first started with three cycles and when I saw my friends they were riding two cycle and I thought it was so cool.

✓ I first started with three cycles, and when I saw my friends, they were riding two cycles, and I thought it was so cool.

Two must be followed by a plural noun, so cycle should be cycles. Use plural nouns after numbers greater than one.

× So I try to write a two cycle bicycle and I did it.

✓ So I tried to ride a bicycle, and I did it.

The story is about a past experience, so try must be changed to the past-tense form tried. Ride is the correct verb for using a bicycle; write means to put words on paper.

× So then my family thought I could ride two cycle bicycle and they bought me.

✓ So then my family thought I could ride a bicycle, and they bought me one.

A singular countable noun such as bicycle needs an article. Use a before bicycle when mentioning one nonspecific bicycle. One refers back to bicycle and completes the verb bought.

× No, I don't think so because there is a problem with the traffic at the Turkish because the roads are really bad.

✓ No, I don't think so because there is a problem with the traffic in Turkey. The roads are really bad.

Use in with the name of a country: in Turkey. At the Turkish is not a correct prepositional phrase because Turkish is normally an adjective, not the name of the country.

× No, I don't think so because there is a problem with the traffic at the Turkish because the roads are really bad.

✓ No, I don't think so because there is a problem with the traffic in Turkey. The roads are really bad.

Using because twice in the same long structure makes the sentence awkward and creates an incorrect connection between the ideas. Use one because clause and then make the second idea a separate sentence.

× But some people ride bike at the seasides, bike sides, walking sides like that.

✓ But some people ride bikes at the seaside, on bike paths, and on walking paths like that.

The plural subject some people requires the plural noun bikes. Use bikes when speaking generally about bicycles. Seaside, bike paths, and walking paths also need forms that match the intended general meaning.

× But some people ride bike at the seasides, bike sides, walking sides like that.

✓ But some people ride bikes at the seaside, on bike paths, and on walking paths like that.

Use at the seaside for a location and on with paths. Prepositions should match the type of place being described: people ride on paths, not at paths.