Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời có ý chính phù hợp nhưng có nhiều lỗi khiến người nghe khó hiểu, chẳng hạn “Yet” nên là “Yes”, “back” nên là “bike”, “dry” nên là “young”, và “play together my friend” nên là “played with my friends”. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu mở đầu rõ ràng, sau đó thêm các chi tiết cụ thể về chiếc xe và hoạt động thường làm. Ngoài ra, tránh lặp từ “I use” và dùng thì quá khứ nhất quán khi nói về thời thơ ấu.

Example: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was small and red, and I rode it to school almost every day. I also enjoyed riding it around my neighborhood with my friends.

Suggestion: Bạn đã đưa ra ý kiến và lý do, nhưng một số từ bị dùng sai hoặc phát âm/ghi lại chưa chính xác: “bats” nên là “bikes”, “drying pie” nên là “riding bikes”, và “they use daily” chưa tự nhiên. Hãy nêu rõ xe đạp phổ biến ở đâu hoặc với nhóm người nào, chẳng hạn trẻ em, học sinh hoặc người đi làm. Bạn cũng nên dùng cấu trúc liên kết tự nhiên như “because”, “especially” và “for example” để phát triển câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn.

Example: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children and students. Many people ride them because they are affordable and convenient for short journeys. For example, children often cycle around their neighborhoods after school.

× Yet I have my back when I was dry.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about a past situation, so use the past-tense verb had instead of the present-tense verb have. The words back and dry appear to be mispronunciations or transcription errors for bike and child; the corrected sentence uses the appropriate vocabulary and tense.

× Yet I have my back when I was dry.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

Use the indefinite article a before the singular countable noun bike because this is one bike being mentioned for the first time.

× This is my bike, very small and red.

✓ It was very small and red.

Because the answer describes the bike during the student's childhood, use the past tense was rather than the present tense is.

× I use I use it every day and play together my friend.

✓ I used it every day and played with my friend.

The question refers to a past period, so both use and play should be changed to their past-tense forms, used and played.

× I use I use it every day and play together my friend.

✓ I used it every day and played with my friend.

The verb play requires the preposition with when referring to another person: played with my friend. Do not say played together my friend.

× Yes, I think bats are popular in my country because children are into drying pie every day and they use daily.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because children ride bikes every day and use them daily.

This question asks about a general present-time situation, so the present tense is appropriate. The corrected answer uses ride and use to describe habitual actions. The words bats and drying pie appear to be transcription errors for bikes and riding bikes.

× Yes, I think bats are popular in my country because children are into drying pie every day and they use daily.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because children ride bikes every day and use them daily.

The pronoun them is needed after use to refer back to bikes. The pronoun they is the subject of the clause, but it cannot replace the object after use.