Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cevabınız doğrudan soruya yanıt veriyor ve bisikleti kimin, ne zaman aldığına dair ayrıntı içeriyor. Ancak geçmişten bahsederken zaman uyumu hataları var: “I have” yerine “I had”, “my dad's buy” yerine “my dad bought” kullanılmalı. Cümleyi daha doğal hâle getirmek için “when I was five” ifadesini ana cümleyle doğru şekilde bağlayın. Ayrıca cevabı bir sonuç veya kısa kişisel ayrıntıyla zenginleştirebilirsiniz.

Example: Yes, I had a bike when I was five. My dad bought it for my birthday, and I was really excited because it was my first bike. I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends.

Suggestion: Cevabınızın ana fikri anlaşılmaya çalışılsa da bazı kelimeler ve dil bilgisi yapıları anlaşılmaz veya yanlış kullanılmış: “I am a churchy” bu bağlamda uygun değil ve “guys really loves” yerine “people really love” denmeli. Soruyu doğrudan yanıtladıktan sonra bisikletlerin neden popüler olduğunu açıklayın. “Because”, “especially” veya “for example” gibi bağlaçlarla daha akıcı ve mantıklı bir cevap oluşturun. Ülkenizdeki kullanım alanlarına dair belirli bir örnek vermeniz içeriği güçlendirir.

Example: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people. Many people enjoy cycling because it is a healthy and inexpensive way to travel. For example, some people ride bikes to work, while others use them for exercise at the weekend.

× Yes I have when I was five my dad's buy me a bike for my birthday

✓ Yes, I did. When I was five, my dad bought me a bike for my birthday.

The question uses the past-tense auxiliary did, so the answer should be Yes, I did, not Yes, I have. The verb buy must also be changed to its past-tense form bought because the event happened when the speaker was five.

× Yes I have when I was five my dad's buy me a bike for my birthday

✓ Yes, I did. When I was five, my dad bought me a bike for my birthday.

The original answer joins several ideas without appropriate punctuation or sentence boundaries. Use a full stop after Yes, I did and a comma after the introductory time clause When I was five. Avoid using dad's before the verb; the correct subject is my dad.

× Yes, I am a churchy and guys really loves riding bikes.

✓ Yes, I am a churchy, and guys really love riding bikes.

The plural subject guys must take the plural verb form love, not the singular form loves. The conjunction and joins the two clauses, so a comma is recommended before and.