Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Bạn trả lời trực tiếp nhưng “pie” là lỗi dùng từ, cần sửa thành “a bike”. Cụm “when I was in the secondary school” chưa tự nhiên; nên nói “when I was in secondary school” hoặc “when I was in middle school”. Hãy thêm một chi tiết cụ thể, chẳng hạn bạn dùng xe đạp để đi học hoặc đi chơi, để câu trả lời phát triển rõ hơn.

Example: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I remember riding it to school when I was in secondary school. I also used it to visit my friends in the neighborhood.

Suggestion: Bạn cần trả lời đúng trọng tâm bằng cách nói “bikes are quite popular”, không phải “parks”. Cần sửa “most of students” thành “most students”, “use bike” thành “use bikes” hoặc “ride bikes”, và “to ride to their school” thành “to ride to school”. Bạn có thể làm câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn bằng cách nêu lý do như xe đạp rẻ, tiện lợi và phù hợp với học sinh.

Example: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among primary and secondary school students. Many of them ride bikes to school because cycling is affordable and convenient. However, adults often prefer motorbikes because they need to travel longer distances.

× I remember when I was in the secondary school.

✓ I remember when I was in secondary school.

In general references to attending a level of education, we usually omit the definite article before school. Use 'in secondary school' when referring to secondary education in general. Use 'in the secondary school' only when referring to a specific school.

× I think parks quite popular in my country because most of students, especially primary or secondary students use bike to ride to their school.

✓ I think parks are quite popular in my country because most students, especially primary or secondary students, use bikes to ride to their school.

The clause 'parks quite popular' is missing the linking verb 'are'. The structure should be subject + 'are' + adjective: 'parks are quite popular.'

× I think parks quite popular in my country because most of students, especially primary or secondary students use bike to ride to their school.

✓ I think parks are quite popular in my country because most students, especially primary or secondary students, use bikes to ride to their school.

Use 'most students' when speaking about students in general. 'Most of' must normally be followed by a determiner, such as 'most of the students' or 'most of my students.'

× I think parks quite popular in my country because most of students, especially primary or secondary students use bike to ride to their school.

✓ I think parks are quite popular in my country because most students, especially primary or secondary students, use bikes to ride to their school.

The sentence refers to students in general, so the plural noun 'bikes' is more appropriate than the singular countable noun 'bike'. In general statements, use a plural noun when talking about things commonly used by several people.