Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời có ý chính rõ ràng và có thêm chi tiết về món quà cũng như việc bố dạy bạn đi xe đạp. Tuy nhiên, có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt chưa tự nhiên: “when it was a dry” không phù hợp trong ngữ cảnh này, nên nói “when I was a child”; “how to how to ride” bị lặp; “and but” không nên dùng cùng nhau; “an two-wheeler” phải là “a two-wheeler”. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề, sau đó thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết theo trình tự logic. Hãy tránh lặp từ “bike” quá nhiều và sử dụng cấu trúc quá khứ đơn hoặc “used to” chính xác.

Example: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father gave it to me as a present and taught me how to ride it. It was a simple two-wheeler, but I really enjoyed cycling around my neighborhood.

Suggestion: Bạn đã trả lời đúng trọng tâm và đưa ra lý do hợp lý là xe đạp có giá cả phải chăng và thân thiện với môi trường. Tuy nhiên, câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi về cấu trúc và sự lặp lại: “I think” xuất hiện hai lần; “ubiquitous in around the world” phải là “common around the world” hoặc “ubiquitous around the world”; “it because it’s” bị lặp; “eco-friendly” cần có dấu gạch nối; và “short community” chưa đúng nghĩa, nên dùng “short commutes” hoặc “short journeys”. Bạn cũng nên dùng từ nối như “because” và “for example” một cách rõ ràng, đồng thời đưa ra một ví dụ cụ thể hơn về việc người dân sử dụng xe đạp.

Example: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. They are affordable, environmentally friendly, and convenient for short commutes. For example, many people ride bicycles to nearby shops or schools, especially in smaller towns.

× Yes, I used to have a bike when it was a dry.

✓ Yes, I used to have a bike when I was a child.

The phrase a dry is incorrect because dry is an adjective, not a noun. Use the noun child after the article a. Also, I was correctly identifies the person being described.

× My father gave it to me as a present and he also taught me how to how to ride a bike and but it was an two wheeler

✓ My father gave it to me as a present and also taught me how to ride a bike. It was a two-wheeler.

The phrase how to is repeated, which makes the sentence structurally incorrect. The combination and but is also unnecessary; use a clear conjunction or separate the ideas into two sentences.

× My father gave it to me as a present and he also taught me how to how to ride a bike and but it was an two wheeler

✓ My father gave it to me as a present and also taught me how to ride a bike. It was a two-wheeler.

Use a before two-wheeler because two begins with a consonant sound /t/. The article an is used before vowel sounds, such as in an old bike.

× I think bicycles are not only common in my country but are also ubiquitous in around the world because it because it's very affordable and eco friendly.

✓ I think bicycles are not only common in my country but are also ubiquitous around the world because they are very affordable and eco friendly.

Do not use in before around the world. The correct prepositional phrase is around the world.

× I think bicycles are not only common in my country but are also ubiquitous in around the world because it because it's very affordable and eco friendly.

✓ I think bicycles are not only common in my country but are also ubiquitous around the world because they are very affordable and eco friendly.

The pronoun it is singular, but its antecedent bicycles is plural. Use they and are to refer to bicycles correctly.

× I think bicycles are not only common in my country but are also ubiquitous in around the world because it because it's very affordable and eco friendly.

✓ I think bicycles are not only common in my country but are also ubiquitous around the world because they are very affordable and eco friendly.

The phrase because it because contains an unnecessary repetition and creates an incorrect sentence structure. Use because only once before the reason.