Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cevabınız soruya doğrudan yanıt veriyor ve iki bisikletiniz hakkında ayrıntı veriyor. Ancak geçmişten bahsederken zaman uyumuna dikkat etmelisiniz: “has” yerine “had”, “is” yerine “was” kullanılmalı. “A 2-wheels bike” yerine “a two-wheeled bike” ve “easy to ride it” yerine “easy to ride” demek daha doğaldır. Bisikletin neden zor olduğunu açıklayarak cevabı daha akıcı ve etkili hâle getirebilirsiniz.

Example: Yes, I had two bikes when I was a child. My first bike had three wheels, so it was fun and easy to ride. Later, I got a two-wheeled bike, but it was difficult to balance on at first.

Suggestion: Ana fikriniz anlaşılır; ancak aynı “I don’t think so” fikrini iki kez tekrarlamaktan kaçının. “I see everywhere some people are riding them” yerine “I see some people riding them everywhere” veya “I see people using them for commuting” kullanmalısınız. “A appropriate” yerine “appropriate”, “bikes roads” yerine “cycling lanes” ya da “bike-friendly roads” denir. Cevabınızı neden-sonuç bağlantısıyla daha düzenli kurun: bisiklet kullanan insanlar vardır, fakat güvenli bisiklet yollarının eksikliği nedeniyle bisikletler genel olarak popüler değildir.

Example: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. Although some people use them for commuting, there are not enough cycling lanes or bike-friendly roads. As a result, many people prefer using cars or public transportation.

× My first bike has three wheels and it was fun and easy to ride it.

✓ My first bike had three wheels, and it was fun and easy to ride.

Because the question asks about your childhood, the past tense is required. Use had instead of has. Also, the pronoun it is unnecessary after the general expression easy to ride.

× The second one is 2 wheels bike and it was hard to ride and sit on it.

✓ The second one was a two-wheeled bike, and it was hard to ride and sit on.

The answer describes a childhood bike, so use the past-tense form was instead of is.

× The second one is 2 wheels bike and it was hard to ride and sit on it.

✓ The second one was a two-wheeled bike, and it was hard to ride and sit on.

In the compound adjective two-wheeled, wheel remains singular because it modifies bike. The noun bike also needs the singular article a.

× The second one is 2 wheels bike and it was hard to ride and sit on it.

✓ The second one was a two-wheeled bike, and it was hard to ride and sit on.

A singular countable noun such as bike needs an article. Use a before two-wheeled because two begins with a consonant sound.

× But I see everywhere some people are riding them even for traveling.

✓ But I see some people riding them everywhere, even for traveling.

Everywhere is placed more naturally after the object or at the end of the clause. The revised word order makes the sentence clearer and easier to understand.

× But we don't even have a appropriate bikes roads in our country so I don't think so.

✓ But we do not even have appropriate bike roads in our country, so I do not think so.

Do not use a before the plural noun phrase appropriate bike roads. If you use a singular noun, the correct form would be an appropriate bike road because appropriate begins with a vowel sound.

× But we don't even have a appropriate bikes roads in our country so I don't think so.

✓ But we do not even have appropriate bike roads in our country, so I do not think so.

Bike functions as a noun modifier and stays singular in the compound noun phrase bike roads. Roads is plural because the sentence refers to roads in general.