Part 1
Examiner
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidate
No, I don't have a bike as a child.
Examiner
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidate
Most probably, yes, 'cause every people do use a bike to travel here and there. So I think bikes are kind of important transport support for every person.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: Use the past tense because you are talking about your childhood: “I didn’t have,” not “I don’t have.” Answer directly and add a brief reason to make your response more complete and natural.
Example: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents thought it was unsafe for me to ride on the busy roads in my neighborhood.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Score: 62.0Suggestion: Use “most probably” or “probably,” but avoid the unnecessary combination “most probably, yes.” Replace “every people” with “everyone” or “many people,” and say “a practical means of transport” instead of “important transport support.” Give a specific reason or example, and use a clear linking word such as “because.”
Example: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short journeys and commuting. They are affordable, environmentally friendly, and convenient, especially in crowded cities.
× No, I don't have a bike as a child.
✓ No, I didn't have a bike as a child.
The question asks about a past period, when you were a child, so the past tense is required. Use did not (didn't) have instead of do not (don't) have.
× Most probably, yes, 'cause every people do use a bike to travel here and there. So I think bikes are kind of important transport support for every person.
✓ Most probably, yes, because every person uses a bike to travel here and there. So, I think bikes are kind of important transport support for every person.
Every is used with a singular countable noun, so every people is incorrect. The correct form is every person. Avoid using every with the plural noun people.
× Most probably, yes, 'cause every people do use a bike to travel here and there. So I think bikes are kind of important transport support for every person.
✓ Most probably, yes, because every person uses a bike to travel here and there. So, I think bikes are kind of important transport support for every person.
Every person is a singular third-person subject, so the present-tense verb must take the third-person singular form. Use uses, not do use. In a regular statement, every person uses is the natural structure.